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Guide (Free verse) by skaskowski
Childhood fades away with felling night,
and life infuses new delight.
Between the stones of life and death
is room for but one faulty breath.
My voice has changed, by mind is grey
I only see the cobwebs now
My
heart has changed, my soul is grey
I only feel the spiders now!
Take me
HOME!
Back to where my life began..
Lead me to a place where I
Can lose
my sight and still have eyes...
Be my guide...
I can feel my lifetime
slipping through
my fingers, i need more
Hands, more hands to catch this
sand
This sand that lets the pain seep through.
My face has changed, my
eyes are gone
I only hear the sirens now
My touch has changed, my skin
is gone
I only feel the needles now!
Take me HOME!
Home to where my
spirit sleeps,
Carry me to someplace warm
A place where my hope can
redeform...
Be my guide...
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2941175
Weighted score: 4.378261
Overall Rank: 13022
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST
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