on Are your eyes by hobojo
21 Aug 2008, 9:10 PM
The symplistic rhyme is why I give a six rather than a seven.
on enter, do. let up, let loose. by FreeFormFixation
21 Aug 2008, 9:08 PM
Clever.. though the elephant bit befuddled me slightly.
Blessed with eight.
Blessed with eight.
on 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub
21 Aug 2008, 9:07 PM
It is good to see you posting again, its good to see some new work from the old guard.
Blessed with nine.
Blessed with nine.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
21 Aug 2008, 9:05 PM
You know, I posses only so much ability to recall.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
21 Aug 2008, 9:04 PM
Um... Well, ok, if you want to see your name there when it's not, who am I to rip up your dreams? Nothing Personal.
replying on Soulless Circle by Tyler J. Mancini
30 Jul 2008, 6:52 AM
-squints again- Ah fuck. I hate these moments... Oh well, atleast we know the drugs are good and they are definetly working.
on Equestrian Dreams by Kamikaze
30 Jul 2008, 6:46 AM
Cmon dood, Mr Ed wasn't equal to beef products, why did you have to devour him and curse yourself with Horse Madness?
Thank god you got off the aba rhyme addiction. Nine.
Thank god you got off the aba rhyme addiction. Nine.
replying on Blood Plush by Kamikaze
30 Jul 2008, 6:39 AM
The other two embodied my hatred for those kid shows. And I genuinely considered them funny, like I enjoyed reading every word.
I wasn't saying you never did write in those forms. As for the preference for villanelles? It enables one to come up with clever revolutions to the lines in rotating rhyme, it's preset at a good length, and it allows a poet to get away with pimple rhymes if he executes it well enough-- which is what you seem to be preoccupied with.
I wasn't saying you never did write in those forms. As for the preference for villanelles? It enables one to come up with clever revolutions to the lines in rotating rhyme, it's preset at a good length, and it allows a poet to get away with pimple rhymes if he executes it well enough-- which is what you seem to be preoccupied with.
on A List of Names That Should SHUT UP by Tyler J. Mancini
30 Jul 2008, 6:31 AM
... Man this reeks of unoriginality. How can I even be moved to parody your pieces? As an enemy, you are no where near formidable.
replying on Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 9:11 PM
I was inspired when I went to Portland.... needless to say there's alot of heroin junkies there.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 9:06 PM
Oh yeah, by the way, I know all about using the ip/user listings:
potentially associated with the user "T. Jonathron Remp" by login, vote, and comment:
ips users
128.252.229.136 T. Jonathron Remp (ips by user)
128.252.229.185 ptantilies (ips by user)
128.252.89.186
128.252.93.136
128.62.151.137
128.83.157.120
24.107.141.99
24.107.192.217
64.123.56.27
65.64.152.86
66.137.214.51
69.151.10.36
69.151.11.174
69.152.93.158
69.154.32.240
70.185.22.152
70.242.144.135
70.242.145.139
70.242.156.70
70.242.65.192
70.243.140.198
70.243.140.81
70.243.153.92
70.243.156.178
70.243.156.96
70.253.68.121
70.253.91.255
74.192.174.220
75.50.57.163
potentially associated with the user "Tyler J. Mancini" by login, vote, and comment:
ips users
208.32.117.78 Tyler J. Mancini (ips by user)
71.85.145.48
But you can have a cookie anyway, TJ.
potentially associated with the user "T. Jonathron Remp" by login, vote, and comment:
ips users
128.252.229.136 T. Jonathron Remp (ips by user)
128.252.229.185 ptantilies (ips by user)
128.252.89.186
128.252.93.136
128.62.151.137
128.83.157.120
24.107.141.99
24.107.192.217
64.123.56.27
65.64.152.86
66.137.214.51
69.151.10.36
69.151.11.174
69.152.93.158
69.154.32.240
70.185.22.152
70.242.144.135
70.242.145.139
70.242.156.70
70.242.65.192
70.243.140.198
70.243.140.81
70.243.153.92
70.243.156.178
70.243.156.96
70.253.68.121
70.253.91.255
74.192.174.220
75.50.57.163
potentially associated with the user "Tyler J. Mancini" by login, vote, and comment:
ips users
208.32.117.78 Tyler J. Mancini (ips by user)
71.85.145.48
But you can have a cookie anyway, TJ.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 8:59 PM
Oh and about anyone who's been here awhile and has been really active back in the day? Know all about my monikers. Cept maybe Shit-Crumpets. But I never hid my identities. It simply enabled me to post more after nentwined put in that bloody restriction.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 8:56 PM
You know, there are ways to have various IP addresses too. Dur...
Oh, and I'm not
* Jennichad
* Doug
* :{)schlecter Dichter
They simply have had ip addresses that matched the same subnet as one I had logged on with. And yes, my ips vary because I had accessed this place from libraries since, you know, I had been homeless a bit. But I assure you, I have only five monikers.
Oh, and I'm not
* Jennichad
* Doug
* :{)schlecter Dichter
They simply have had ip addresses that matched the same subnet as one I had logged on with. And yes, my ips vary because I had accessed this place from libraries since, you know, I had been homeless a bit. But I assure you, I have only five monikers.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 8:48 PM
Yeah, what alter ego? Lmao.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 8:45 PM
Man you are petty. But you must think you're clever for commenting badly on the poems you posted with your alter ego. But, see, quite a few more clever and talented fuckers did that before you even had a clue that this site existed. Tsk tsk tsk.
replying on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote
29 Jul 2008, 8:42 PM
Awww, how precious. You have multiple monikers TOO! And some proxy skillz!?>!??!?! -yawn- What next, you gonna zero bomb my work into the worst list? -Shrug- Been there kiddo, done that, but atleast you've moved on from the "SHUT UP" stage.
Hold on to your testicles, this just might get irritating.
Hold on to your testicles, this just might get irritating.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 8:39 PM
Do you think acting like a stupid thirteen year old bitch and telling me to shut up is going to work? I actually want to see how many times you end up telling me to shut up in reply to my comments.
You must get comments via e-mail eh? Always ready to receive a shower of praise for your genius work I bet. I know that having me bitch slap you for not writing up to par can have a devastating effect on your self-loving psyche. Tsk, tsk, tsk.
Oh, OH!!!
Lemme guess:
SHUT UP!!!!
LMAO.
You must get comments via e-mail eh? Always ready to receive a shower of praise for your genius work I bet. I know that having me bitch slap you for not writing up to par can have a devastating effect on your self-loving psyche. Tsk, tsk, tsk.
Oh, OH!!!
Lemme guess:
SHUT UP!!!!
LMAO.
replying on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
29 Jul 2008, 8:25 PM
Oh, I'm sorry. I've not been around lately as much as I used to. I understand that my frank and candid criticism of your poetry might sting a little... Or a lot. But getting me to shut up with a ten doesn't work. Infact, now I'm on a mission. :)
-Whips out the ole jester asshat and places it delicately pon his brow.-
-Whips out the ole jester asshat and places it delicately pon his brow.-
on Come Winter, I say! by T. Jonathron Remp
29 Jul 2008, 8:09 PM
You know, you have your little moments where I start to get that tingle that signals that you've done good, and then you stumble on your face, get up, give me the tingle again, and again stumble. At the end of the piece you broke both your legs. Calcium gets brittle and the soul gets bitter during winter, eh?
Six.
Six.
replying on We can all be free with our legs by daggatolar
27 Jul 2008, 12:23 AM
Not anymore. But yes, I had actually lived on the streets, even traveled with nothing but my backpack.