Re: Three Daughters by <~>	24-Aug-02/4:47 PM
-=Dark_Angel=- --so, is this 'poemranker', or 'ranker rancor'? no criticism on the poem? do your worst, sirrah. there are few spots i'm thinking of modifying it, and would like your opinion of the weak points. many thanks.
Re: Z. by ErgoErgun	23-Aug-02/10:40 PM
i don't think i ripped any poetry yet, tonight anyway. i've been shining up my karma, and practicising my Frassian--keeping that asp of a tongue in my mouth when i'm bent. i 'm trying to put a little something balladic together, seeing as how the olden times are back with an elven-smite vengence. what's your excuse
Re: Z. by ErgoErgun	23-Aug-02/10:25 PM
unstained, EE. inside out. yes.
Re: Z. by ErgoErgun	23-Aug-02/10:20 PM
i do not think this is an ode to me; must be some other Z. Some other Z who finds him a bit too...raw. not that there aren't some lovely raws to be had, it's just that this style of it is not one of them. so, what i'm trying to say is that I LIKE THIS POEM. (i also like prune ice cream. there. my Hubris. destroy me with it.)
Re: Crying Beside a Lake by x311	23-Aug-02/9:57 PM
now here you were, crying about your bruised plums, and i offer the parable of the laid-by plum, sage with age, and you start whining about vessels? more wine! sommelier, another bottle of your finest!
Re: Crying Beside a Lake by x311	23-Aug-02/9:54 PM
that will be 'in the ice cream', trussed up nicely with some steamy-hot chocolate sauce. oh dear, who's being greedy now? i like my petits vanilla, thank you very much. although cheese and port never seems to fail, either.
Re: Choking by SoulSlippedAway	23-Aug-02/9:51 PM
we're not mean, we're just drawn that way. but seriously, what were you trying to say? that she's depressed? does her self pity overpower her so that she has not the strength to end it? i'm not saying that every protagonist has to be a hero, or even an anti-hero, but i'd like them tto do something other than dress goth and moan about how awful it all is. wooden shoe?
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/9:45 PM
weak doth reak, and fowl is fare... (sorry, too much JRR this weak) a vessel's worth is in its capacity, its void, D.
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/9:34 PM
see p&k, yoa ARE fired up. did someone bruise you plums tonight? actually, there's an inn here in jolly olde CT that serves prune ice cream--a recipe from the 1700's. yum yum. another glass of wine, sirrahs?
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/9:24 PM
no extra charge tonight? feeling is free? damn. too bad yer over the pond...
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/9:18 PM
p&k, you're fired up tonight.
Re: Communal ranking by ==Doylum	23-Aug-02/9:08 PM
something small, you know, like a petit-on-all-4s?
Re: Communal ranking by ==Doylum	23-Aug-02/9:07 PM
well, not greedee per se, more like i-lika-littull-sumthin'-sweet after my salt. know what i mean, luv?
Re: Communal ranking by ==Doylum	23-Aug-02/8:59 PM
pssst! i don't think tchur's going to rub the nub, D. she wasn't even blessed with a sybillic rant; she only recieved a 2-lined blessing. axle greas ounds lovely for starters, but what's for afters? (assuming the starfish flambee to be the entree, bien sur)
Re: Evening by unknown	23-Aug-02/8:50 PM
and next weak we shall deel with teechurs who set a bad example.
Re: Evening by unknown	23-Aug-02/8:38 PM
you out-clevered us by deleting those comments, t-chur. is that today's lesson? censorship of those whose opinions differ from yours?
Re: On the Eve of the '98 Leonids by lw_nd	23-Aug-02/6:17 PM
by the way, i didn't toss you the goose egg.
Re: I did not ask by Antares42	23-Aug-02/11:08 AM
did you save anything, gain anything, learn anything? tell me about that part of it. tell me a sweet, sad story.
Re: love song by <~>	23-Aug-02/10:24 AM
it was delicious to write it, as well... for the other side, check out 'salt', a little ditty i wrote for my ex...we've been divorced 10 years now, but everyonce in a while, i have a litlle flashback...i wrote 'salt' during one of those.
Re: she wonders, by <~>	23-Aug-02/10:04 AM
'she wonders' is the only one (for him) that i have put here. it is not over for me; i still sift him out of my thoughts, when i catch the memories. more thoughts of him will be posted; they must be pared down first, and the core bared.