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Communal ranking (Free verse) by ==Doylum
Isn't yours big but oh so pert and one feels its enormity by god but it hurts. Isn't yours well shaped and full of fun and if i see it once more i think i might cum. isn't yours shapely and so well crafted and its so good my lover its like i've been shafted Isn't it in the style that we like, no adore if you'd just kept the rhythm i'd be down on all fours Isn't it like we had one giant nub and all of us were able to give it a rub isn't it true that we're here to be rankers fuckity feck balicks feckity fuck

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.875
Weighted score: 4.9663825
Overall Rank: 8496
Posted: August 23, 2002 5:43 PM PDT; Last modified: August 23, 2002 5:43 PM PDT
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Comments:
[1] Frass @ 138.88.35.49 | 23-Aug-02/7:02 PM | Reply
Dylm, I don't like your bilious tripe, nor that of DA, H8, or any of the other roach spray sniffers on this site. Shove off and good riddance to yas.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ | 23-Aug-02/7:06 PM | Reply
i haven't had a drink in minutes dearest my liver is in tip top condition. I'm afraid i can't accept your offer of a date i'm otherwise engaged on that night, but do keep trying and one day i may be able to fit you in.
[n/a] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 23-Aug-02/8:59 PM | Reply
pssst! i don't think tchur's going to rub the nub, D. she wasn't even blessed with a sybillic rant; she only recieved a 2-lined blessing. axle greas ounds lovely for starters, but what's for afters? (assuming the starfish flambee to be the entree, bien sur)
[n/a] ==Doylum @ | 23-Aug-02/9:04 PM | Reply
after that anyone would be quite replete, your not suggesting one should be gready are you?
[n/a] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 23-Aug-02/9:07 PM | Reply
well, not greedee per se, more like i-lika-littull-sumthin'-sweet after my salt. know what i mean, luv?
[n/a] <~> @ 24.44.185.41 | 23-Aug-02/9:08 PM | Reply
something small, you know, like a petit-on-all-4s?
[n/a] ==Doylum @ | 23-Aug-02/9:12 PM | Reply
but you suggested we have the chocolate first, i wont be rushed. But yes maybe rat-o-van would suffice
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