poemranker ::Goodbye by Roisin

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Free verse № 5461

Goodbye

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

I am with you Still standing There by the train Holding you. Embrace carry eternity Lips never part; Love let moment live always Be with me Like the warmth from our union As we kiss. Goodbye.

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3 comments

[0] ==Doylum 20-Jul-02/7:51 AM Reply
wu wu wharf
[6] pete 21-Jul-02/5:44 AM Reply
understand the zero but somehow this got to me .the short lines help the picture emerge if taken slowly
[8] Art Glocken 29-Jul-02/4:09 AM Reply
O dont normallyt like soppy stuff but this is good.