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Goodbye (Free verse) by Roisin
I am with you Still standing There by the train Holding you. Embrace carry eternity Lips never part; Love let moment live always Be with me Like the warmth from our union As we kiss. Goodbye.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.875
Weighted score: 4.9663825
Overall Rank: 8448
Posted: July 20, 2002 4:12 AM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2002 4:12 AM PDT
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Comments:
[0] ==Doylum @ 213.122.30.3 | 20-Jul-02/7:51 AM | Reply
wu wu wharf
[6] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 21-Jul-02/5:44 AM | Reply
understand the zero but somehow this got to me .the short lines help the picture emerge if taken slowly
[8] Art Glocken @ 143.52.4.17 | 29-Jul-02/4:09 AM | Reply
O dont normallyt like soppy stuff but this is good.
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