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Goodbye (Free verse) by Roisin I am with you
Still standing
There by the train
Holding you.
Embrace carry eternity
Lips never part;
Love let moment live
always
Be with me
Like the warmth from our union
As we kiss.
Goodbye.
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Posted: July 20, 2002 4:12 AM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2002 4:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9663825 Overall Rank: 8501 Comments:
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==Doylum @ 213.122.30.3
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20-Jul-02/7:51 AM
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wu wu wharf
understand the zero but somehow this got to me .the short lines help the picture emerge if taken slowly
O dont normallyt like soppy stuff but this is good.
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