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Goodbye (Free verse) by Roisin

I am with you Still standing There by the train Holding you. Embrace carry eternity Lips never part; Love let moment live always Be with me Like the warmth from our union As we kiss. Goodbye.

pete 21-Jul-02/5:44 AM
understand the zero but somehow this got to me .the short lines help the picture emerge if taken slowly




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