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Free verse № 10796

I did not ask

by Antares42

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

I did not ask To feel To care To love I did not ask To see To know To believe I did not ask To cry To hurt To suffer I did not ask To cherish To lose To live

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[n/a] <~> 23-Aug-02/11:08 AM Reply
did you save anything, gain anything, learn anything? tell me about that part of it. tell me a sweet, sad story.
[9] god'swife 23-Aug-02/1:10 PM Reply
Good poem. Especially cherish lose live. Somes this whole whirling thing up in 3 tidy words. I'm happy. 9/10.