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I did not ask (Free verse) by Antares42 I did not ask
To feel
To care
To love
I did not ask
To see
To know
To believe
I did not ask
To cry
To hurt
To suffer
I did not ask
To cherish
To lose
To live
Up the ladder:
a moment through the window of a northbound commuter train
Down the ladder:
Michael
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Posted: August 22, 2002 6:24 PM PDT; Last modified: August 22, 2002 6:24 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.686235 Overall Rank: 12081 Comments:
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23-Aug-02/11:08 AM
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did you save anything, gain anything, learn anything? tell me about that part of it. tell me a sweet, sad story.
Good poem. Especially cherish lose live. Somes this whole whirling thing up in 3 tidy words. I'm happy. 9/10.
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