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I did not ask (Free verse) by Antares42

I did not ask To feel To care To love I did not ask To see To know To believe I did not ask To cry To hurt To suffer I did not ask To cherish To lose To live

god'swife 23-Aug-02/1:10 PM
Good poem. Especially cherish lose live. Somes this whole whirling thing up in 3 tidy words. I'm happy. 9/10.




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