| Re: a comment on I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/5:11 PM |
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and i mean that based on the general tone of your prior entries...up until you were struck, it seems, by the urge to l-o-v-e. you have not grown into the argot as yet.
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| Re: a comment on I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/5:09 PM |
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true, but coming from you it seem like mockery. if it is true, blessing to you and yours. if not, see above.
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| Re: Reasons by little_angel_maria |
11-Nov-02/7:14 AM |
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| Re: gerbil by betty swallox |
11-Nov-02/6:27 AM |
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funny. (but wrong rhyme scheme to be a limerick.)
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| Re: Picnic Of Love by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/6:26 AM |
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my god, man! get your meds adjusted for the sake of all that is sacred and profane!
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| Re: I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/6:24 AM |
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this bit is just not working for you settle. sorry. no poontang for you.
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| Re: My Woman, My Lover, My Friend by -=SeTTle=- |
11-Nov-02/6:23 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Perversions by razorgrin |
9-Nov-02/6:33 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Perversions by razorgrin |
9-Nov-02/6:29 PM |
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i am at that point, between paychecks, where i have started drinking my sister's coors light. there are no longer any innocents, anywhere. unless one of you would like to buy me an IPA? or a scotch, neat?
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| Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus |
9-Nov-02/5:00 PM |
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there there, h. any time you want someone to really trammel you, you let mistress z know. my rates are quite reasonable, and i have a cellar full of merlot.
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| Re: Plastic People by cosmiccantinaguy |
9-Nov-02/2:42 PM |
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this is the angriest poem i've ever read. got a solution, or just a problem?
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| Re: The Bomb by anitawit |
9-Nov-02/2:36 PM |
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| Re: My Kites On Grandmother's Four-poster Bed by anitawit |
9-Nov-02/2:36 PM |
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pretty scenes and memories
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| Re: Determination by Birdman42s |
9-Nov-02/2:33 PM |
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you lose the rhythm in the last stanza
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| Re: (no title) by savagelymakeitcount |
8-Nov-02/9:05 PM |
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this feels like a lyric, but wears a little thin at the end.
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| Re: Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT |
8-Nov-02/1:45 PM |
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this feel like it wants to be 'may the road always rise to meet you' in flavor, but it's too uneven. needs more cohesive structuring, and less fragmented thinking. make it more lyrical, if that is the effect you were going for...
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| Re: a comment on Perversions by razorgrin |
8-Nov-02/1:02 PM |
don't forget to eat some corn, if you're going to get it on whit the scat-thang. makes for interesting contrasts.
p.s. leave the damn innocents alone.
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| Re: a comment on Of the opposition. Zipcode graffitti by Bachus |
7-Nov-02/1:29 PM |
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you are either foisting or hiding. which will it be?
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| Re: Of the opposition. Zipcode graffitti by Bachus |
7-Nov-02/12:25 PM |
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i'm calling you on this one. fess up. NOW-uh!!!
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| Re: Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi |
7-Nov-02/12:17 PM |
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such a voyage of discovery! i like my early morning exploits much more than the ones you write of. to each his own, though.
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