| Re: Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Apr-03/9:15 PM |
i get it. dissonance. :}
but the rhyme feels forced, so that one line can't be the whole point of the poem, right? i mean, it's a poem, not an illustration. or have you been a naughty boy with settle? did he rub off on you?
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| Re: Voodoo on channel 13 by Bachus |
6-Apr-03/9:13 PM |
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take . . . the pin . . . OUT!!!!
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| Re: "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
4-Apr-03/8:46 PM |
appropriate, dead center, and beautiful.
i inaugurate the Voracious Ouroboros Awarde, granting it to you, for you willingness to augur with your own intestines. (even the fucking title eats itself)
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| Re: Last Nightâs Dream (Freud-o-riffic) by razorgrin |
4-Apr-03/2:09 PM |
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| Re: Prayer for Peace by razorgrin |
4-Apr-03/1:56 PM |
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| Re: All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin |
4-Apr-03/1:55 PM |
athena! athena! let down thy buns!
hahahah! nice.
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| Re: The Strength Of Thomas by OneFingerAnswer |
3-Apr-03/2:19 PM |
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eyes see, but that does not make it real. eyes can be fooled, and easily too. still, i like this.
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| Re: I shot speed by horus8 |
3-Apr-03/2:14 PM |
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fine. how's ham on rye? and you can get your own goddamn coffee.
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| Re: Adios Poemranker. by scitz |
3-Apr-03/10:49 AM |
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| Re: Blood And Iron by intheailse |
3-Apr-03/8:16 AM |
ita--this has a lot of potential. your last stanza is awkward; you've forced it to fit. check your punctuation, as well. nice job.
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| Re: sic homina ad papyrum by bondjedi |
3-Apr-03/7:40 AM |
oh my, this made me chuckle.
thanks for a laugh.
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| Re: a comment on Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10 |
1-Apr-03/4:27 PM |
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again, thank you for making my point for me. you have my permission to pray for my soul. you might as well pray for p&k's too, just because i know it'll piss him off.
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| Re: a comment on 2 Haiku by Blindproject217 |
1-Apr-03/12:54 PM |
check out the 'help' button on the tp left of the page:
Haiku
The haiku is a japanese poetry form, evolved from the renga during the 16th century. It is a three line, unrhymed set of seventeed syllables (5-7-5).
It is typically a pair of contrasting concrete/sensory images, with each image so dependant on the other that the whole thing collapses if one word is altered.
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| Re: a comment on fever by <~> |
1-Apr-03/10:55 AM |
ah, my pig!
perhaps you should attend the cavalcade of poets in may? for i'll be across the pond, and looking for guidance as to the best ales, ESBs and IPAs in town! Olde Cad knows the details. ta.
xo,
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| Re: a comment on fever by <~> |
1-Apr-03/7:32 AM |
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mark your calendar then. i expect to meet a female companion, as well!
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| Re: a comment on fever by <~> |
1-Apr-03/7:15 AM |
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but May will be the most exciting, when the poets converge on London. It's looking like the last weekend in May, , Mr. Tof.
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| Re: a comment on Normal by elizabethann |
31-Mar-03/2:52 PM |
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| Re: a comment on fever by <~> |
31-Mar-03/2:09 PM |
once i've been sprung, i will. alls i needs is a good muse, metaphorically speaking, of course.
watch for it.
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| Re: a comment on prettycock by kthulah |
31-Mar-03/12:35 PM |
no, i live in new england. i had my first 40+ man this winter--he was disappointing, but i won't brand the entire age group based on one night's experience.
sorry, no web cam :{ does he have one?:\
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| Re: a comment on Jack by MuDvAyNe |
31-Mar-03/11:47 AM |
zero's not gay; he's an omnivore. if he's got 2 pints in him and you stand still for half a minute, you're peeling him off your leg.
(sorry zero.)
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