poemranker ::2 Haiku by Blindproject217

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Haiku № 45751

2 Haiku

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 Mar 2003 · Edited 2 Apr 2003 · 5 comments

PURSUIT Crowds getting restless Chariots are closing in Hands part great divide ALONE Pipe smoke fills the room A winter raging outside No one to confide

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[n/a] Katie2 1-Apr-03/12:38 PM Reply
Actually could someone explaine to me what is Haiku? I'm not sure how the patterens for them go. But blind I'm not going to rate you since I don't know the patterens for Haiku, but I do like them :)
[n/a] <~> › Katie2 1-Apr-03/12:54 PM Reply
check out the 'help' button on the tp left of the page:
Haiku

The haiku is a japanese poetry form, evolved from the renga during the 16th century. It is a three line, unrhymed set of seventeed syllables (5-7-5).

It is typically a pair of contrasting concrete/sensory images, with each image so dependant on the other that the whole thing collapses if one word is altered.
[n/a] Blindproject217 › Katie2 1-Apr-03/3:26 PM Reply
Thanx
[9] Robert K Foster 23-May-03/10:47 AM Reply
9 for the second one. lose the titles.