| Re: One Country by poetandknowit |
14-Oct-02/8:20 AM |
'barren in bounty'--'barren, late of bounty'? the birdsong is a beautiful touch, as are the lips and hips and the promise of both. your aim is indeed true.
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| Re: Few Words by Tom Colebrooke |
14-Oct-02/8:41 AM |
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ask p&k. he's a journalist.
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| Re: Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/9:04 AM |
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and, calling it 'snow-white' conjurs disney for me. now i am not everyman, but i think you might consider the efeect the title has on the piece overall.
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| Re: A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT |
14-Oct-02/9:07 AM |
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an army of thinkers. easier said than done, but it is a good fight, and i am fighting it, as are you. you just can't let on that you're after their soul right away, or that you're speaking (poetry) (shhh!!!). people are scared of poetry because they think it is beyond them. pshaw!
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| Re: Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/9:10 AM |
i like what you are trying to say, but you are not communicating it effectively
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| Re: Sanity by Tascobar |
14-Oct-02/9:56 AM |
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are there 12 of them, and does mr pitt make the occasional cameo?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Oct-02/10:46 AM |
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i never waffle when i wear my gowne of sorrow. perhaps i am wronged to do so.
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
14-Oct-02/11:46 AM |
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'why the Browne Winds blew' or 'God goes not at all with wine!'...hard to say which i favor more. both are sheer revelation. bravo. encore.
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| Re: Rummage Sales by jessicazee |
14-Oct-02/4:40 PM |
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fuckin A. the game is indeed on, lassie
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| Re: Tuesday, again and again and... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
14-Oct-02/4:41 PM |
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no. but it makes for fine lyrics. rock on, h.
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| Re: First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus |
14-Oct-02/4:43 PM |
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disappointing ending. the fore had such aplomb, and then, ssslurp--over. bah. try again h. you know better than to foist this off on me. z,
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| Re: Shut Out by joho117 |
14-Oct-02/4:45 PM |
"That I actually still loved you
And found you so nice."
this is unadulterated crap. p&k, where the hell are you? this one needs a good lambasting, and i am not up to it, in my weakened condition. bah, humbug.
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| Re: glory bar realities by royalflesh |
14-Oct-02/4:47 PM |
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post more. pretty please.i need more.
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| Re: realities <from above their brilliance is short-lived> by royalflesh |
14-Oct-02/5:08 PM |
mud has no place in my mind's eye for this unrhyme; and a mississippi sky drips right for the time, ages or aeons or eras, sublime-all those vowels long, longing sing singy-sounds.... sigh. if i looked at you with long puddle eyes that poured, would you throw me down, as a god? my eyes are grey; their color they will not divulge.
wash away the mud and tell it again. the earth stains this tale of two, and more
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Oct-02/7:23 PM |
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iambic impies an even count. so obvious...
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| Re: simple silence by daniella |
15-Oct-02/7:07 AM |
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15-Oct-02/11:18 AM |
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swept away. today. such a sweet lament, richa.
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15-Oct-02/11:46 AM |
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if he is the ruinor, why would he give you that?
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| Re: Homemade Greetings by jessicazee |
16-Oct-02/8:07 AM |
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| Re: Jerk ?? Circle by horus8 |
16-Oct-02/8:50 AM |
"Murderers still love
In their blunted
Lurching strokes"
my favorite.
try and explain it away.
i'll love a murderer as well as the next man.
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