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Shut Out (Free verse) by joho117
Since we last parted We didn't see each other, Everysince that moment I have always wondered, But then that day came, When I saw you again, In that certain place, Where I least imagined. I didn't expect, And I was surprised That I actually still loved you And found you so nice. So I lay awake, And thought of the past But then it's too late, Cause your happy at last. You've found someone new, You love me no longer, And it truly hurts me, When you're always together. And there's one thing now, That I came to know Though it pains me a lot, I just have to let go. You loved me then But now no more. I think I've lost you For you've closed your door.

Up the ladder: Avetis
Down the ladder: Little wishing well

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10455
Posted: October 1, 2002 9:01 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 3:40 PM PDT
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[4] limonade @ 198.164.250.237 | 12-Oct-02/1:20 PM | Reply
Have you ever heard a song called "Don't You Want Me Anymore?" by Pulp? It's the same idea, better expressed. Shouldn't it be, "you love me no longer". how much does it hurt you? This is just a statement of fact. Describe your feelings.
[2] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 14-Oct-02/4:45 PM | Reply
"That I actually still loved you
And found you so nice."

this is unadulterated crap. p&k, where the hell are you? this one needs a good lambasting, and i am not up to it, in my weakened condition. bah, humbug.
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