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Shut Out (Free verse) by joho117
Since we last parted
We didn't see each other,
Everysince that moment
I have always wondered,
But then that day came,
When I saw you again,
In that certain place,
Where I least imagined.
I didn't expect,
And I was surprised
That I actually still loved you
And found you so nice.
So I lay awake,
And thought of the past
But then it's too late,
Cause your happy at last.
You've found someone new,
You love me no longer,
And it truly hurts me,
When you're always together.
And there's one thing now,
That I came to know
Though it pains me a lot,
I just have to let go.
You loved me then
But now no more.
I think I've lost you
For you've closed your door.
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Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10455
Posted: October 1, 2002 9:01 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 3:40 PM PDT
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