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Tuesday, again and again and... (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
I left for a road trip on Tuesday She tried to put up a fight But I packed for more than a mere weekend As her words took hold like a bite When I drove away from my castle Moon stained my vision with light I love my road trips on Tuesday but I loathe my legs stiff with fright My leprosy lurks beside my master The tongues disappear from my nightmares I sit and I am brushing my mom's hair Tell me? Is that sane? Cuz I'm scared, I'm naked, and it's Tuesday I just don't fucking feel right So, I wept for my retreat on Tuesday and I loved her with all of my might I bit my lip just to taste the blood It was a frightening sight My tears were coated with visions I closed my eyes in good-bye Your name I add to my lesions Two wrongs won't make this right So, I went for a road trip on Tuesday and I loved you with all of my might My leprosy lurks beside my master The tongues disappear from my nightmares I sit and I am brushing my mom's hair Tell me? Is that sane?

Up the ladder: #17
Down the ladder: A love of the midlands

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6153846
Weighted score: 5.449882
Overall Rank: 2921
Posted: October 14, 2002 2:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 2:07 PM PDT
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[9] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 14-Oct-02/4:41 PM | Reply
no. but it makes for fine lyrics. rock on, h.
[8] blackball @ 207.179.180.57 | 25-Nov-02/12:18 AM | Reply
i got the tune of "No Rain" by Blind melon in my head while i was reading that...which made it even better then it already was.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > blackball | 25-Nov-02/11:16 AM | Reply
weird. i was just listening to that album this morning on the way home from a friends house.
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