| Re: nothing could by nentwined |
21-Oct-02/8:25 AM |
and then you stopped.
excellent.
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| Re: THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void |
21-Oct-02/8:29 AM |
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WE MIGHT PERCEIVE YOUR WORDS AS MORE ROMANTIC IF YOU DIDN'T SHOUT ALL THE TIME.
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21-Oct-02/8:41 AM |
shouldn't it be 'they abash'?
i don't buy the warm bit. nor the verve. the sea is ancient and mighty., not young and spritely.
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21-Oct-02/11:14 AM |
why
do
you
leave
so
many
lines
between
stanzas?
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| Re: Premarital Sex (Zombie Fantasy) by Sigh'ense... |
21-Oct-02/11:17 AM |
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you judge. why? leave that to the cotton mathers of the world. if you are going to abandon yourself to it, do so. you're not shockong anyone, except maybe shin.
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| Re: Fruit Punch by teacup |
21-Oct-02/11:17 AM |
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don't vote for your own poems. thank you.
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| Re: this tuesday morning by teacup |
21-Oct-02/11:18 AM |
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hey wow. this rhymes. IT MUST BE A POEME!!!!
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21-Oct-02/11:25 AM |
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even then. it is not sexy. it is sexier. truth
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| Re: regret. by darby pyn |
21-Oct-02/11:29 AM |
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you are to be watched. edit more. genius happens in the darkroom.
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| Re: health cards by slipping |
21-Oct-02/11:43 AM |
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| Re: InCumBent by slipping |
21-Oct-02/11:45 AM |
"when intimacy rots on your body because you never used your heart "
nicely put. shape it some more. it could be great.
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| Re: Mi Virgin De Guadalupe by slipping |
21-Oct-02/11:48 AM |
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did you mean 'altar' at the last? because i like it better as 'alter'. nice job.
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21-Oct-02/11:50 AM |
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21-Oct-02/11:53 AM |
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| Re: unprepared by Aggreddion |
21-Oct-02/11:54 AM |
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u shoodent use u. it's bad spellin
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| Re: Dream Maker by Blue Magpie |
21-Oct-02/11:55 AM |
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| Re: A love of the midlands by ==Doylum |
21-Oct-02/1:02 PM |
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22-Oct-02/6:50 AM |
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| Re: Body Language by Ninoy_Instigator |
22-Oct-02/6:55 AM |
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suspiciously strikes me as too soft-sounding a word, but i love the implications. very good.
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| Re: The Dreamer by Nicholas Jones |
23-Oct-02/7:38 AM |
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the more you write them, the more easily they flow. strength in discipline. nice work.
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