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Fruit Punch (Other) by teacup
And I said "punch?" because it was a part of my lunch that smelled pink, bubbly and crude. I asked because I didn't know or if I would, not if it was punch or not, but because I don't know my own soul.

Up the ladder: Madison's Mom
Down the ladder: stroll in the park

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Weighted score: 4.1666665
Overall Rank: 13257
Posted: October 20, 2002 12:33 AM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2002 12:33 AM PDT
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[1] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 21-Oct-02/11:17 AM | Reply
don't vote for your own poems. thank you.
[n/a] teacup @ 67.250.103.254 > <~> | 21-Oct-02/5:15 PM | Reply
I didn't vote for my own poem.
thank you.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.96 > teacup | 21-Oct-02/5:54 PM | Reply
teacup
why do you crack when
I pour myself some tea?

(to the tune of the Heartbeat theme)
[2] ciantu @ 216.128.137.27 | 5-Dec-02/2:31 PM | Reply
twas sorta retarded
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Dec-02/6:13 PM | Reply
ha as a aha ha! hee. ohhhh?s
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