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Fruit Punch

by teacup

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

And I said "punch?" because it was a part of my lunch that smelled pink, bubbly and crude. I asked because I didn't know or if I would, not if it was punch or not, but because I don't know my own soul.

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5 comments

[1] <~> 21-Oct-02/11:17 AM Reply
don't vote for your own poems. thank you.
[n/a] teacup › <~> 21-Oct-02/5:15 PM Reply
I didn't vote for my own poem.
thank you.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › teacup 21-Oct-02/5:54 PM Reply
teacup
why do you crack when
I pour myself some tea?

(to the tune of the Heartbeat theme)
[2] ciantu 5-Dec-02/2:31 PM Reply
twas sorta retarded
[9] Bachus 12-Dec-02/6:13 PM Reply
ha as a aha ha! hee. ohhhh?s