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stroll in the park (Free verse) by rosiebailey i was walking a long
but there was a bit of a pong
the wind in my hair
when i saw a bear
it was eating scotty dog
which explained the smell of a bog
the bear was sick
when it had a lick
nothing could handle the smell
from hell
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Posted: November 8, 2002 2:25 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2002 2:25 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.1666665 Overall Rank: 13253 Comments:
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8-Nov-02/4:00 AM
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Aw, man, ur gangsta stylins aint flowin like dey used 2, ur losin da madskillz and da wespect.But tell da Scotty Dog dat his stinkin ass needs a bath
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