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Surface Damage (Free verse) by un4208 Surface Damage is something i don't get
I swollow my pain
I drink the words
Let it go
I Keep it all inside and lock it inside
Some day it will break free
But until that day I lock it up
Like a Jail cage
You want to feel pain you try to break that cage
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Hey if u don't like this poem i don't care my teacher says im special
Up the ladder:
stroll in the park
Down the ladder:
Europeans shouldn't mess with Ronald McDonald because one day he will rule their pathetic "continent"
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Posted: November 26, 2002 3:36 PM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2002 3:36 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.1666665 Overall Rank: 13254 Comments:
I have a special pair of shoes, there swished and spiked, i've talk about then before, but godswife paid no heed. Would you like a go? Special boy
very, very special. and your bus, among other things, is half the normal size, non?
swallow my pain
I bet you ARE special! You get to ride the little yellow schoolbus... 124 view(s)
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yer i like it a bit thin in areas but its good as a skeleton i gove it a solid 7 almost an 8