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Surface Damage

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

Surface Damage is something i don't get I swollow my pain I drink the words Let it go I Keep it all inside and lock it inside Some day it will break free But until that day I lock it up Like a Jail cage You want to feel pain you try to break that cage ------------------------------------------------- Hey if u don't like this poem i don't care my teacher says im special

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[7] T'ien 26-Nov-02/3:37 PM Reply

aaaawwww so special
yer i like it a bit thin in areas but its good as a skeleton i gove it a solid 7 almost an 8

[3] ==Doylum 26-Nov-02/5:16 PM Reply

I have a special pair of shoes, there swished and spiked, i've talk about then before, but godswife paid no heed. Would you like a go? Special boy

[1] <~> 26-Nov-02/7:45 PM Reply

very, very special. and your bus, among other things, is half the normal size, non?

[6] Jill Stockinger 27-Dec-20/4:43 PM Reply

swallow my pain

I bet you ARE special! You get to ride the little yellow schoolbus...