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Surface Damage (Free verse) by un4208

Surface Damage is something i don't get I swollow my pain I drink the words Let it go I Keep it all inside and lock it inside Some day it will break free But until that day I lock it up Like a Jail cage You want to feel pain you try to break that cage ------------------------------------------------- Hey if u don't like this poem i don't care my teacher says im special

T'ien 26-Nov-02/3:37 PM
aaaawwww so special
yer i like it a bit thin in areas but its good as a skeleton i gove it a solid 7 almost an 8




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