unprepared

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

some said it'was moving closer the air around you getting colder wind picks up, changing much wonderin just how bad itll be should have seen this coming so many subtle signs, youre blind to simple things, flipping flowers turning leaves how could this sneak up a foundation once believed so strong everything shakes, off the walls each time something hits and breaks you wonder what will actually remain the burning candle starts to flicker needing to believe, the glow can last doubt creaps in, how long'll last how many storms it can take -Leaving u alone in the big dark

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[n/a] god'swife 21-Oct-02/8:13 AM Reply

There's quite a few typos. this doesn't flow very well, I think partially because of the afore mentioned.

[n/a] <~> 21-Oct-02/11:54 AM Reply

u shoodent use u. it's bad spellin