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unprepared (Free verse) by Aggreddion
some said it'was moving closer
the air around you getting colder
wind picks up, changing much
wonderin just how bad itll be
should have seen this coming
so many subtle signs, youre blind to
simple things, flipping flowers turning leaves
how could this sneak up
a foundation once believed so strong
everything shakes, off the walls
each time something hits and breaks
you wonder what will actually remain
the burning candle starts to flicker
needing to believe, the glow can last
doubt creaps in, how long'll last
how many storms it can take
-Leaving u alone in the big dark
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9812
Posted: October 19, 2002 6:24 PM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2002 6:24 PM PDT
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