Re: Not God's Wife, Just a Girl by w~* ATHENA *~w	22-Nov-02/7:22 AM
like the way you start off innocent, and then throw in the etherised patient. insidious.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Nov-02/8:13 AM
really, he's just an all-too-eager dauphin.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Nov-02/8:16 AM
rosemary's for remembrance, tint. why didn't you remember to end the flow with an ebb, instead of a jar?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Nov-02/3:27 PM
and pixels are worth...nothing at all.
Re: Wave to the starving children Miss Denmark. by horus8	24-Nov-02/3:51 PM
oy.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Nov-02/3:57 PM
shit???
Re: Lloyd Street Interlude by jdsnyd	24-Nov-02/3:59 PM
do you cast a reflection?
Re: The Abyss of myself by ciantu	24-Nov-02/4:01 PM
funny how 3 of 4 of your poems have anonymous 10 votes...secret admirer, perchance? or not?
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/6:50 AM
jesu christu! make the ganglia twitch! beneath that sultry exterior, the slowed beat of an icy heart... nice rewrite, dewd.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/10:53 AM
where'd you sit? i was in 116... graet show.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/10:53 AM
and i hear sheis insatiable.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/1:14 PM
i prefer mine with a nice chianti.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Nov-02/1:16 PM
in st louis this may, they had a 'hottest mom' contest. were you there? because it seemed like they wouldn't be keeping their pants up, from the tone of the ad.
Re: Check Yourself by INTRANSIT	26-Nov-02/7:15 PM
woo hoo! look who's back in the house!!! go, boy! okay, now the poem: the punctuation in the second stanza confuses me. do you need the comma after shoulder? like the thought.
Re: Charlie by INTRANSIT	26-Nov-02/7:22 PM
since you have given him a name, i'd like to see anthropomorphism in the poem. i.e., call him 'him,' not it. swing it just a little more, too.
Re: Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8	26-Nov-02/7:35 PM
oh my. left coast strikes back. and makes me smile.
Re: Surface Damage by un4208	26-Nov-02/7:45 PM
very, very special. and your bus, among other things, is half the normal size, non?
Re: Boxers Over Y-Fronts by un4208	26-Nov-02/7:49 PM
so you wear your boxers over your y-fronts, that way, when a chick laughs at you for being small, you can blame it on your undergarments? GENIUS!!!
Re: With Sleepless Breath... by LovingWhispers	26-Nov-02/8:21 PM
a very comforting chant, but, this line feels awkward in sound: "When I think about us making love "
Re: ode to bacchus by daniella	26-Nov-02/8:24 PM
so, where have i heard that before? 'soulles goat', that is. i must have been bending too close to his brown eye. again. dammit. i love an asshole that can rhyme.