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With Sleepless Breath... (Other) by LovingWhispers In the comfort of our silence
Into your naked chest
I turn my face to kiss your warmth
And sigh with sleepless breath
My lips touch softly on your skin
Captivated as they rest
Recalling and re-tasting
I crave with sleepless breath
Are you dreaming now my lover,
Of our sensual rhythmic dance
Do you feel my loving presence
As I stroke your gorgeous hands
When I think about us making love
My desires are caressed
Here in your soothing aura
I am content with sleepless breath
Up the ladder:
missing you
Down the ladder:
That Girl
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Posted: November 26, 2002 2:25 PM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2002 2:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4809 Comments:
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26-Nov-02/8:21 PM
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a very comforting chant, but, this line feels awkward in sound: "When I think about us making love "
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