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24-Mar-03/12:33 PM |
3 things:
pathway--singular--unless you have more than one rectum?
(did they tear you a new one, laddie?)
also, S1, tentative.
i had no idea you were so...sensitive. kiss kiss. i'll bring my strap on, then, shall i?
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| Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america |
26-Mar-03/8:30 AM |
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but will you come to connecticut?
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| Re: Disappear by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Mar-03/8:36 AM |
you really should of known.
hahahaha!!!!!!!!
white sheet.
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
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| Re: By the way... by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Mar-03/8:38 AM |
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| Re: if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems |
26-Mar-03/8:50 AM |
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| Re: Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8 |
26-Mar-03/10:52 AM |
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maybe not atomic any more. maybe darwinian. have a 9 on me.
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26-Mar-03/10:56 AM |
hey, i know this guy. i never got in the car--or anything else--with him, though.
well done, mrs.g.
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| Re: The grand embeddiment by horus8 |
26-Mar-03/12:37 PM |
fig leaf pornography?
what!
why are they callled devil docs anyway? somehow i missed that.
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| Re: riddle by ~incarnate~ |
26-Mar-03/12:47 PM |
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| Re: Tupperware-Caskets by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Mar-03/7:22 PM |
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find something i can have with a long flat red, and we're talking, poncho.
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| Re: WhyI laugh with Moses. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Mar-03/7:23 PM |
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you are so cute when you are stoned, you know that???
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| Re: The dance as old as time by wEdible Underpantsw |
28-Mar-03/6:34 AM |
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28-Mar-03/6:41 AM |
what about 'pawned' for a title?
i really like this, especially "It's just like you to know the name and the price of the Best One of
Anything." i don't get the slumbering hills reference, though. would i understand it if i saw them?
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| Re: Theory Of Anything by Blue Magpie |
28-Mar-03/7:50 AM |
why do i have a problem with the wind carving snowflakes? it irritates me. i am such a realist. why can't i warp my mind around a logical twist? ugh.
anyway, i like it. but i think the strongest part is
"The important thing
is to cut the right wire
when defusing the time-bomb".
but then, i also think that that's a separate poem. the ideas aren't melded enough for me, in this poem's current state. hope that helps.
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| Re: Meditation 03 by Blue Magpie |
28-Mar-03/7:52 AM |
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you know, you can rhyme more than one syllable at a time; you can cross and slaqnt rhyme; you can get all kinds of complex patterns working, or you can thump away on the bass drum, like you did here. it might make the verse less clunky if you expanded your technique.
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| Re: Ode to a cock muncher by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
28-Mar-03/7:57 AM |
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hey, you deleted my comments. no fair.
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| Re: Unlocking Happiness by darkhelmet10 |
31-Mar-03/11:40 AM |
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damn. i read the title fast, and i thought it said, "unCOCKing happiness". it's that damn kthulah, and her prettycock poem, getting me mind on one track. sigh.
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| Re: prettycock by kthulah |
31-Mar-03/11:42 AM |
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oh, my. this warmed me through and through. can i borrow, when you've done with him?
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2-Apr-03/8:07 AM |
mrs g,
spanish is not a language i can claim any understanding of, so please forgive me for running this through an online translator. what i couls make out, i liked very much. my heart aches for you.
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| Re: sic homina ad papyrum by bondjedi |
3-Apr-03/7:40 AM |
oh my, this made me chuckle.
thanks for a laugh.
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