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20-Mar-03/7:16 AM |
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collosumnal! ye shall be released, angry jean.
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| Re: Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT |
20-Mar-03/7:18 AM |
fine. you see, when it is harder, it is easier.
you are better for the exercise, and this is quite a lovely little villanelle, goodly sir! bravo!
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| Re: Nutty by Bacchus |
20-Mar-03/8:33 PM |
i thought bacchus was dead???
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20-Mar-03/8:36 PM |
oh, my. whatever could be wrong with that!!!
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20-Mar-03/8:38 PM |
DID YOU USE BULBOUS ROOT VEGETABLES????!!!!????
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| Re: The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw |
21-Mar-03/11:47 AM |
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| Re: Lost by LeBlank II |
21-Mar-03/11:55 AM |
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| Re: The System by LeBlank II |
21-Mar-03/11:57 AM |
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www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm
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| Re: Klondike by wLeBlancw |
21-Mar-03/12:00 PM |
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| Re: Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw |
21-Mar-03/12:01 PM |
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| Re: Kooo Kooo DirectOr by wLeBlancw |
21-Mar-03/12:03 PM |
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| Re: Eternal Waiting by darkhelmet10 |
23-Mar-03/4:10 PM |
you could put on more eyeliner.
and add a few more piercings.
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| Re: Controlling Desire by maffy |
23-Mar-03/4:53 PM |
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so, you're in love with a necrophiliac medical examiner???? ew.!!!!
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| Re: Shut Up by openwounds |
23-Mar-03/5:22 PM |
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fingers are next, right? so no more typing in of poems???
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| Re: Fleeting Fantasy by Sawa |
23-Mar-03/8:03 PM |
well, what a nice little can of worms you have here.
it's bitter withour being brutal; it uses a cliche here and there, but upends them.
but, somehow, i wanted you to act. you're still a victim, in this piece. stab, or walk, or something!
returning is no panacea: the poem, it dies.
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23-Mar-03/8:03 PM |
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cheery thought. what are you doing to make it any different?
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| Re: Leave by Luv2write |
23-Mar-03/8:21 PM |
luv2write, please check out codependents anonymous. 12 steps never worked for me, but, what the hell, most people seem to get off on being addicted to something. and 'those rooms' are full of people who will listen with open ears as you spilll this sort of thing. honestly, where is your sense of self? do you really think like this?
oh, wait, i get it, it's a satire, and you're making fun of 12 steppers!!! in that case, schwing!!!!
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| Re: Life by Luv2write |
23-Mar-03/8:21 PM |
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see other comment. unless you're 12. then go see a guidance counsellor.
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| Re: As I went riding with Jeeves by bondjedi |
23-Mar-03/8:23 PM |
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you know exactly what they mean!!!!
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| Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit |
23-Mar-03/8:25 PM |
you forgot the H2O purification tanks!!! damn it! why would anyone hole up with you?!!!
you're an athlete, not a survivor!
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