| Re: Death on my arm by INTRANSIT |
5-Jul-03/6:37 PM |
hey rich. i'm back. and safe.
and you are more minimslist than when i left...
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5-Jul-03/7:16 PM |
you can't just say leaden like that and have it mean only one thing! what about x-ray? and alchemy?
damn it, man! are you getting lazy!!!????
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Jul-03/7:17 PM |
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the first 4 lines are great, though. do something more with that.
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| Re: Fireworks & Family Reunions (Randel's cry for love) by Shardik |
5-Jul-03/7:20 PM |
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| Re: Not quite myselfs. by cleverdevice |
8-Jul-03/6:39 AM |
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8-Jul-03/7:06 PM |
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amen. absolutely beautiful. welcome back.
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| Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8 |
9-Jul-03/10:03 PM |
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is everyone OFF for the summer???
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| Re: a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub |
9-Jul-03/10:18 PM |
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all gone. new clothes. new shoes. Leo, do you still need me?
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| Re: Butterfield, Minn. Tommy's farm 1993 by Bachus |
9-Jul-03/10:29 PM |
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14-Jul-03/4:36 PM |
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drink more. masturbate less. that is all.
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| Re: thought & memory by Bill Z Bub |
14-Jul-03/9:40 PM |
BILL!! do not tickle these deities!! the are violent, and virulent.
drop the great; embrace the mundane. you will love me for it.
x, z
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| Re: On A Night Like This by bazz |
14-Jul-03/9:48 PM |
this is the ttle of a bob dylan song.
what do youwant from us, when you give less than we expect? the naming is everything.
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| Re: walking by Rodavlas |
14-Jul-03/9:54 PM |
no. last stanza--no way in hell.
the EVERYTHING is off, and that is not unique; it's just not right.
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| Re: S c r e a m by Kitch |
15-Jul-03/8:40 PM |
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i know exactly what you need. take it waaay back, and treat yourself to a little "pretty hate machine" , extra loud! you'll thank me in the morning!!1
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| Re: rainday by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jul-03/8:41 PM |
i want more bounce in this nonsensey-like rhymer!
(oh, i am such a whiner!)
good star, but take it all the way, BZB.
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| Re: Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer |
15-Jul-03/9:07 PM |
profane...
did you want 'chords', to give it more blood?
maybe "laid" instead of "lain"
good work, here, but not user-friendly. then again, does it need to be?
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| Re: Scarecrow by horus8 |
15-Jul-03/9:11 PM |
first verse--fuck.
rest, v.g.: 9, for the future.
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| Re: Border towns & the runs by horus8 |
16-Jul-03/7:55 PM |
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| Re: rainday by Bill Z Bub |
16-Jul-03/8:43 PM |
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22-Jul-03/10:07 AM |
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