Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT |
6-May-03/5:17 AM |
Wow I really loved the imagery in this poem. I was reading the other comments and theres not much clue to the story in this I think I get it but dont want to look a fool. it was lovely reading your poem I am new here on this site and am reading all the top 15 poems in the next few days. I am giving you an 8, nice to meet you and thank you for sharing your lovely poem.
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6-May-03/5:20 AM |
As a woman of the world I adored this poem, especially the womb description. We ladies need to stick together on this site. I vote a 9.
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Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
6-May-03/5:23 AM |
Very touching and vividly told I loved your use of language and metaphor.
Why didnt you call yourself Mr Fox?
I vote you a 9 its wonderful.
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6-May-03/5:26 AM |
Oh my goodness I need cheering up as I've just read Mr Pigs 'The Blooding' that too was sad. This is incredibly poignant and moving and I hope the next one in the best list is on a happier note. I vote 9.
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Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 |
6-May-03/5:29 AM |
You have a wild imagination and you write with relentless passion. I liked the connotations with snakes there fascinating and mysterious. I vote 8
(at least this didn't make me sad)
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6-May-03/5:32 AM |
Oh my how romantic and I never expected it from a title like Bread & Oranges. I think your wasted on here you should be writing plays for high society theatres. I vote 10 and adore your work.
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Re: Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-May-03/5:34 AM |
I have read some fine poetry today in the top 15 and this is no exception. I vote 7
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Re: Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig |
17-May-03/4:26 PM |
I think its wonderful. MAybe if you hadn't of referenced it to Footprints you may have had the recognition you deserve, other than that I think it carries a message of hope. 9
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Re: Burst! by INTRANSIT |
20-May-03/11:20 AM |
Beautifully enticing in its description, you have me wowed.8
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Re: may 18 by Bill Z Bub |
20-May-03/11:23 AM |
Bar a few there is some fine poems on the current entries today, this is no exception and the delivery of each line has a message and I loved it.
But do punks really sneer?
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20-May-03/11:25 AM |
I hope this things can only get better this sucks.
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20-May-03/11:27 AM |
Loved this bit.
The fall of the leaf,
On its back or its face
Is,
No more of a reason
To inter-polate
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Re: The Order Of Things by Mr Pig |
20-May-03/11:29 AM |
Beautifuly written, the attention to detail is astounding and I loved the message here and I think we miss it in our everyday lives, I love the way you write, are you married?
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