on Invisible too by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 2:36 PM
I am glad you are still on the hoof.
on some deleted poem
24 Jul 2002, 12:28 PM
Why Beakism's is a Haiku, this is not? Can you please explain?
on Coloring Loss by molly
31 Jul 2002, 5:35 AM
I like the vivid images. But I don't like following the traditional sterotype of associating all negatives and nils with black.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2002, 8:28 AM
are you talking about masturbation?
on Daily Rutein by New Life Drug
31 Jul 2002, 1:45 PM
The poetic atmosphere is more involving, the emotions are deeper. Good poem.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2002, 1:48 PM
Ask a Professor of Psychology and Christian Humanist to solve your confusion!
on Why Work? by TheTiredTyrant
31 Jul 2002, 2:02 PM
After a life of tyranny/Tired, exhausted like a granny/ You do not want to do any job/ In Wall street, a restaurant, or a shop?
Then why blame poor computer/
Which serves every one better and better?
Then why blame poor computer/
Which serves every one better and better?
on Invisible too by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 2:12 PM
This is perfect and beautiful, horus. I know you are rebellious and sombre most of the time [which is not uninteresting], but let us see your sober side too. I give you nine.
on Invisible too by horus8
31 Jul 2002, 2:21 PM
Or talking to me?!
on Prophecy by New Life Drug
31 Jul 2002, 1:39 PM
If you are thirteen, did you right
your first poem in your mother's womb? Perhaps you should have stayed there, there is no such thing as life. Stay.
your first poem in your mother's womb? Perhaps you should have stayed there, there is no such thing as life. Stay.
on HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi
31 Jul 2002, 5:23 AM
Thanx for this expalanation. British English 's' is 'z' in American Englsih in many words: verbs and nouns. You gave examples. Another is
organis[z]ation.
Thanks for being so positive about the poem.
organis[z]ation.
Thanks for being so positive about the poem.
on Painty by wlshepherd
29 Jul 2002, 12:20 PM
The combination or rather the unity of image and thought [paint] is well maintained from the beginning to end with an excellent end. Clear, readable, interesting and innovative.
on Cour by Cha no Onna
29 Jul 2002, 10:58 AM
Good advice, I agree.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2002, 2:08 AM
Thank you horus8 , now I put the pieces back together. I like juicy mango.
on Reverse Pschology by Mister Cakes
27 Jul 2002, 5:45 PM
If you can't spell psychology how can you reverse it?
on some deleted poem
24 Jul 2002, 3:05 AM
Can't you react like grown ups? Or typical reaction of scratched egoes?