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12-Mar-03/3:35 AM |
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Geko, undeniably, pain inspires us to write hard-hitting poetry the most, therefore I am able to tolorate the mostly senseless swearing and depressings tones. Awesome stuff, you're really talented.
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| Re: Driftwood by GekoHawaii |
12-Mar-03/3:37 AM |
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I really really like this one. The rhyme scheme is different at the end so it draws your attention to it more. Well done once again.
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
13-Mar-03/7:31 PM |
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
13-Mar-03/7:31 PM |
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13-Mar-03/7:35 PM |
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You are really talented. I bet a lot of {members of the opposite gender} admire that and you are therefore very popular?
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13-Mar-03/7:37 PM |
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This is absolutely incredible. What is there to say but 'wow'?
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14-Mar-03/12:23 PM |
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Can you please write more? Your stuff is awesome!
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14-Mar-03/8:44 PM |
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Read "At Least I Love You." I wrote it for a friend but it could be something someone's trying to say to you.
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14-Mar-03/8:50 PM |
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Like famenglory mentioned, I am indeed frightened to live in the same state as you. However, I am glad it is you and not the embarrassment known to this website as -=Dark_Angel=-, who thinkst that the only way to get through to someone is to swear and make fun. You prove it wrong though, because your words are powerful and reach the heart, whereas its words are in one ear and out the other, and their sole purpose on this website is to be skipped over in order to more quickly find an opinion with weight to it; i.e. someone who actually matters. I suggest you ignore the likes of him and keep writing what you feel. If it's what you feel then it can't be wrong and it can't be bad. So tip your hat to the devil's angel and say "screw you" and get on with your gift.
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17-Mar-03/3:49 PM |
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I really like this one. It's very true and really well written. Wonderful.
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| Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
17-Mar-03/4:37 PM |
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This is really good. I've done a lot of mission work in Atlantic City and it's very true to the stories of the people I've met there. Doesn't it look nice with snow on the beach? The water's actually not that bad in the middle of January.
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| Re: Cursed by GekoHawaii |
22-Mar-03/6:27 PM |
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I'm guessing you're worth it. I'm REALLY guessing. But it's just a guess... I think...
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| Re: Relentless by GekoHawaii |
22-Mar-03/6:30 PM |
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Cool setup... Nice poem. Keep writing. Keep expressing yourself, you intelligent being you.
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23-Mar-03/7:40 PM |
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I highly doubt anyone could forget you... your words are quite memorable, actually.
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| Re: Mem'ries past by GekoHawaii |
23-Mar-03/7:41 PM |
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You must have met some special people in your life... Keep writing about them. It's interesting to read your work. Great job. Keep adding.
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| Re: mirror by famenglory |
26-Mar-03/2:05 PM |
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An excellent poem... it stuns my brain and all I can think of to really say how I feel about this one is WOW.
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| Re: god damn P.D.A. by sir_heff |
22-Apr-03/12:40 PM |
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Ummm... I know how it feels when everyone's mating around you... but not hanging from a tree... so I can't really relate.
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| Re: Insomniac by GekoHawaii |
5-May-03/7:45 PM |
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You already know I like it.
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| Re: Espera by GekoHawaii |
5-May-03/7:48 PM |
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| Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii |
26-Nov-03/9:03 AM |
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