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Mem'ries past (Other) by GekoHawaii My world was shattered
Broken, tattered
You were there for me
From the start
It hurt to part
'Cause you were there for me
You lifted me
And made me see
Gave a view of hope
Showed me caring
Just kept sharing
That same view of hope
Now love is vast
Since friendship passed
And two worlds came together
I thank the stars
For mem'ries scars
Since two worlds came together
Up the ladder:
Hate
Down the ladder:
During divorce (child's view)
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Posted: March 23, 2003 6:12 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2003 6:12 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6384 Comments:
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Luv2write @ 152.163.188.232
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23-Mar-03/7:41 PM
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You must have met some special people in your life... Keep writing about them. It's interesting to read your work. Great job. Keep adding.
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