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Mem'ries past (Other) by GekoHawaii

My world was shattered Broken, tattered You were there for me From the start It hurt to part 'Cause you were there for me You lifted me And made me see Gave a view of hope Showed me caring Just kept sharing That same view of hope Now love is vast Since friendship passed And two worlds came together I thank the stars For mem'ries scars Since two worlds came together

Luv2write 23-Mar-03/7:41 PM
You must have met some special people in your life... Keep writing about them. It's interesting to read your work. Great job. Keep adding.




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