Re: a comment on Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand |
7-Feb-03/4:38 PM |
Thanks for the input you DARK LORD OF RUINATION
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Re: Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/4:24 PM |
You know, I once met Fred Segel at a debutante's ball - I gave him my number, he gave me a call. He told me to meet him at the corner at eight - I got there at nine, too bad I was late. Stupid idiot, I don't know what I missed: Fred Segel's a star and it's he I dissed - his pimping ass mack ass whacked out building with the ivy on the wall but not around the lettering...etc.
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Re: a comment on Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/4:21 PM |
well write a poem about that!!!
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Re: a comment on Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/4:19 PM |
I once saw trainspotting on the same day I got a flu shot does that count.
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Re: a comment on Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/2:40 PM |
I for one love matzo ball soup.
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Re: Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/2:20 PM |
The mentos line is good. The dope line's a bit tired.
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Re: a comment on Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/2:19 PM |
There's nothing wrong with that, in and of itself, of course.
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Re: a comment on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub |
7-Feb-03/2:15 PM |
I bet I'm more talented. And better in bed. And smell nicer.
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Re: Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/2:14 PM |
By the way, did you know Dark Angel is Jewish??
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Re: a comment on Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/2:07 PM |
you know I meant |\| | |/| right
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Re: Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/2:06 PM |
I was talking about the last two lines.
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Re: Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/2:00 PM |
a bit niney for my taste.
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Re: Soldiers by Bobjim |
7-Feb-03/1:52 PM |
This is quite funny, good work. PS Settle agrees.
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Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub |
7-Feb-03/1:36 PM |
God you really were my understudy weren't you. The single word final line thing is a bit tired, don't you think? Visually this is quite good, it straddles the line between normal line breaks and image. Try to make the words more interesting. 6.
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Re: a comment on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub |
7-Feb-03/1:32 PM |
The reason I call you a knockoff is because you're full of fire and passion and such. They day you laugh at yourself harder than anyone else can is the day I stop goading you.
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Re: a comment on **The Therapist** by scitz |
7-Feb-03/1:15 PM |
RGallet is the poetry world's newest newly discovered genius.
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Re: A meeting at Maverick, then dinner. by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
7-Feb-03/1:00 PM |
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Re: While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
7-Feb-03/12:52 PM |
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Re: downtown bus by Bill Z Bub |
7-Feb-03/12:50 PM |
I liked you better as a cheap Settle knockoff.
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