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Soldiers (Free verse) by Bobjim
I like to play with my soldiers I play with them when I'm in bed. I don't like my sergeants or corporals So I play with my privates instead.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.625
Weighted score: 5.7059712
Overall Rank: 1896
Posted: February 5, 2003 12:56 PM PST; Last modified: February 5, 2003 12:56 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23 | 5-Feb-03/6:19 PM | Reply
Christ man, are there no officers in this unit? Such a rag-bag army of ruffians can have no effectiveness on the battlefield!
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 5-Feb-03/9:27 PM | Reply
Soldier! you will respect the chain of command, and drop a chit in the chit box, and await your turn.
[9] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 7-Feb-03/1:52 PM | Reply
This is quite funny, good work. PS Settle agrees.
[10] Yardbird @ 80.1.17.58 | 8-Feb-03/10:56 AM | Reply
Excellent Lad! However, for being involved in carnal shenanigens with ranking officers WITHOUT inviting me, your Unit Commander, I have no choice but to punish you. Get down and give me twenty.....oh, yeah, just like that, baby, oooh.....
[10] Ranger @ 213.1.45.6 > Yardbird | 10-Feb-03/12:39 PM | Reply
You don't actually know the person you're talking to there!
Wonderful work, BJ, just wonderful!
[10] 47Ronin @ 212.135.1.53 | 2-Feb-04/7:19 AM | Reply
A very good poem reflects the stateof the US Army very well.
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