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Soldiers (Free verse) by Bobjim I like to play with my soldiers
I play with them when I'm in bed.
I don't like my sergeants or corporals
So I play with my privates instead.
Up the ladder:
Sleepy Geek
Down the ladder:
Torvald, the Dwarven Toast-Smith
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Posted: February 5, 2003 12:56 PM PST; Last modified: February 5, 2003 12:56 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.7059712 Overall Rank: 1924 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23
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5-Feb-03/6:19 PM
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Christ man, are there no officers in this unit? Such a rag-bag army of ruffians can have no effectiveness on the battlefield!
Soldier! you will respect the chain of command, and drop a chit in the chit box, and await your turn.
This is quite funny, good work. PS Settle agrees.
Excellent Lad! However, for being involved in carnal shenanigens with ranking officers WITHOUT inviting me, your Unit Commander, I have no choice but to punish you. Get down and give me twenty.....oh, yeah, just like that, baby, oooh.....
You don't actually know the person you're talking to there!
Wonderful work, BJ, just wonderful!
A very good poem reflects the stateof the US Army very well.
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