Re: peppermint by the indign	30-Mar-04/12:34 PM
Interesting to say the least. Which I'm not known for that. I enjoyed it, and admit it, who wouldn't? It was off the wall and lacking a bit in grammer(But hey like most poets from the before the 20s aren't). -9-
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Mar-04/12:38 PM
-9-
Re: I Married an Infectious Woman (My Love, 'Futility') by SupremeDreamer	30-Mar-04/12:42 PM
Much Improvement! I am indeed impressed. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Mar-04/12:45 PM
Wonderful.
Re: love comes but once by francis nor capule	2-Apr-04/10:02 AM
That is the sappiest thing I've ever read. To say the least its wretched. To say the most its honest but lacking in both the wonder that is love and the writing that is poetry. I hope this impressed your "lover" because thats the only person you should have shared this set of words with. This type of peom is whats known as a Pimple. I should know I've written alot of them before they even had it as a poem type. Read more verse. Good Verse. Then try writing. Exsamples here being -=Dark_Angel=- to show you shear verbal skill and intelligence, Godswife and Horus8(In his many different usernames) for depth, humor, and emotion. -2- Just because its honest, horrid, but honest.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Apr-04/11:34 AM
I know exactly how that feels.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Apr-04/11:39 AM
I think its more of a lyric than a freeverse, emotion beautifully Displayed and easily absorbed.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Apr-04/11:45 AM
The image on the 'don't slip' just doesn't seem to fit right. Maybe an Aliteration to Humpty Dumpty would work better, I love the end point.
Re: My heart had a war...no body won by sonawrote	7-Apr-04/11:55 AM
Childish Longing, followed by Adult Realization. The first few stanza's(Thanks Zodiac for making that happen) Seemed a tad pouty and rather brat like, but the last few show true wisdom. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Apr-04/1:47 AM
Hit. That seriously summed up my wish before bed every night, for almost a year. Seriously, beautiful beyond imagination, but you might want to fix that typo (5th Line Last Stanza), other than that absolutly touching.
Re: Three Bears by hotwire	10-Apr-04/1:55 AM
Good the of the Idea of comparing Teddy Bears, something comforting, to Men, without a doubt a odd territory. The execution is overly simplifed and a bit flailing to hold its self together but works out fairly well at the end. -8-
Re: My Pain 2004 by ToMuchPain04	10-Apr-04/2:02 AM
Who Do You Think Your Kidding? You Call This A Free Verse? Pimple, Its Called A Pimple, And ITS TERRIBLE! There is no depth, nothing more than whining, and trying to rhyme. Learn about the art, before you stumble thru another rhyme session with boo-woo your host Bandaid Butter Fingers! -0-
Re: A Pen Named Ed by Enkidu	10-Apr-04/2:05 AM
Masterful, Good Meter, and it made me Giggle
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Apr-04/2:09 AM
How very wise indeed, Thou Have shown us the way to our salvation, Praise be to Thee, oh Mighty Teacher -10-
Re: The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	25-Apr-04/9:19 PM
This is one of my first co-writes.
Re: Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8	25-Apr-04/9:51 PM
Scary
Re: Perversions 8: The Reckoning by razorgrin	25-Apr-04/9:59 PM
Oh How I've waited!
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac	25-Apr-04/10:10 PM
Pimple? Borderline, a Masterpiece
Re: Bottom half of a phone by That One	25-Apr-04/10:21 PM
A bit bland. Liven it up.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Apr-04/10:22 AM
Let me know if my photo doesn't work