Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
22-Jun-03/9:39 AM |
Damn I just thought some body threw that wig out! I knew I should have found out whom it was. Pity me. Insanely funny by the way. -10-
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Re: 86'd by Bachus |
22-Jun-03/9:43 AM |
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA here take HAHAHAHAHA this HAHAHAHAHAHAHA before HAHAHAHA I HAHAHAHA die HAHAHA of Laughter HAHAHAHAHAHAHA -10- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Re: Women Fight Dirty by scitz |
22-Jun-03/9:46 AM |
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Re: Fusion by Kitch |
22-Jun-03/9:51 AM |
Wow! Depth, and Rhyme, Worked out seemlessly. True still a few cliche lines but over all, Nice. Best I've read by you so far. -9-
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Re: Elephant Man by Kitch |
22-Jun-03/9:54 AM |
Well written, but seems more a lyric to me(or at least thats how I imagine it). -8-
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Re: -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw |
26-Jun-03/11:48 PM |
You've got to be shiting me, or gold bricks. Which ever you prefer.
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Re: -=Dark_Angel=- -=In_Decline=- by wEdible Underpantsw |
26-Jun-03/11:54 PM |
You still are D.A., You still are.
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Re: Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme |
30-Jun-03/7:21 AM |
Don't feel bad. I ate yoda's dorito's and he got really postal. Welcome to the Ranker Dreamer. Beware the many names of Horus8. One of the best writers(I feel he's as good as D.A. but lacks the proper Malice in order to defeat our winged one) and a damn good musician. He's good on not being harsher than you deserve, and fucking brilliant. I'm giving this an -8- cause its funny and happens to alot of newbies here. Welcome to the club.
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Re: Sage by DreamerSupreme |
30-Jun-03/7:38 AM |
Still flailing, a nice attempt but so cold. No emotional depth to give it some feeling. Feels like its written by a machine. Even though its not it reads quite banal. -4-
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regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Jun-03/7:49 AM |
Yig! Infuriatingly mixed. I love the last stanza but I didn't really care for the rest. Hated the first 2 stanzas. The parts are nicely done such as
"Bringing the flames
Over the fields
Where children play games"
But others make me want to have the WHORE stab my eyeballs such as
"All fools thinking
Their off the hook
Fooled by their drinking
The king comes
With the long sharp
Dagger of pain
He has gone insane
All actions before
Done in vain"
-6-
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Re: -=Words_From_Dark_Angel=- by wEdible Underpantsw |
30-Jun-03/12:48 PM |
You are such a Tard. I think you are D.A.
And shouldn't it be feces?
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Re: I Wonder by EmicaX |
30-Jun-03/5:41 PM |
A good first poem for the Ranker C. but be fair warned that if they are all like this You are gonna get Flamed big time. Later Daze C. Later Daze. -8-
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Re: 9/2/2003 by cpill |
30-Jun-03/8:38 PM |
Actually Not true at all. Plenty to see her. I like. I'm looking forward to more. -8-
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Re: your great by GAY AS FU*K |
1-Jul-03/9:46 AM |
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Re: Poem Ranker by abecedarian |
1-Jul-03/9:52 AM |
I hereby proclaim you the greatest poet laureate
ever to type a poem into a text box. Your Poem is so great. Really. Well I'll admit its funny if nothing else. Sad but funny. Seeing as to how you don't have one yet, -7-. To make your collection of numbers a little more complete.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Jul-03/9:55 AM |
Nor does it prove that they don't. 0's prove nothing, in fact, But still very good. Just for making me think -10-.
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Re: he's so good looking by GAY AS FU*K |
1-Jul-03/9:58 AM |
An -8-. Funny and Creepy.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Jul-03/10:15 AM |
Everyone else here apparently missed it but the actual words thrown in at the sides is a very nice touch. I almost gave this a 5 but the words at the side was a clever bit, you sly devil you. -10-
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regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Jul-03/10:22 AM |
I want you, Forgive you, and I love you are all I made out and I'm not even sure about the forgive you. I don't forgive you. My eyes heart like a mother fucker. -9- for being clever, minus -2- for the eyestrain, so -7-
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Re: Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus |
1-Jul-03/10:25 AM |
PRETTY DAMN FUCKING GOOD!!!
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