Humm, u r funny :) Thanks for putting a smile on my face finally. I was amused by ur comment. I am actually a size 0 LOL, buy my clothes right off the mannikins ;). Spirited is how I would describe myself. You sir, I guess, are in your 40s? Single eh?

I had to read it twice, but it was worth it ,i suppose

I agree with the others, do something about the ending.The style is good

Umm... I definitely like this. For the nobility of the sentiments expressed here, take a 9

I too hated dolls..

[10] as anonymous. I was having a hard day at the office and when I came to poetry ranker, this was the random poem that it threw at me. Every line resonated within. Dont know why :)

what is the fibal verdict? has or have?

being an engineer, its always a pleasure to come across boolean algebra. unusual poem 10

"as the dawn begins to fade
brightening up the dusk" How??

My routine has been quite as meaningless for the past 2 months. Perhaps even more so. It can summed in 4 words... eat, sleep, eat, sleep....... Wish I could put it words like you

Waiting for part 2

loved it..

"halting my whole world" ???

Excellent, excellent!!! take a 10 for this poem about my favourite impressionist

I strolled with you..

I found myself singing this poem..

thanks sasha :-)

Thanks Ranger! Point taken. Will make the change in the revised version.

Thanks Howl. I agree. I am thinking of a suitable line to clarify my intent.

I could see Vancouver in my mind's eye