Re: a comment on John Denver's hang-glider by horus8	16-May-03/9:57 AM
Oh, come now, you have to admit... this poem is damn tricky smart. Let's not pass it off on College governor liftings.
Re: Pity me. by cleverdevice	16-May-03/9:08 AM
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! 9 lol. because my heart imploded. becaus my head is a robotic potato peeler.
Re: Be Not Afraid Of Dying. by Mr Pig	11-May-03/5:23 PM
You are awesome at freeform, but your haikus are consistently off. this one's 5 7 6.
Re: a comment on My Dark Power by The Martyr	11-May-03/3:38 PM
Yeah! dude, come on. the only difference between this and your ass is some shit just stinks regardless of the nappy's staunching strength, dude. Duder. dudesky. duderooni. dudette. Anyone, by the way, in my opinion, that uses the word 'dude' loosely or tightly to gain familiarity or bridge age gaps in a conversation are normally better off just shutting the fuck up without appearing to be 'hip' or 'with it'. Dude, because, they're not in fact, it's sad. Everytime my little brother calls my dad 'dude', or my dad calls me dude? I think to myself, now here are two people that are so afraid of communicating they can't even use one another's proper birth name or said title, and yes James, that's sad. So could you refer to me from this point on as Duke Dudington? Thankyou, for your attention to this most serious of matters.
Re: Mother Defined by loneshadow29	11-May-03/1:33 PM
Kiss ass. We all know how much I despise the womb, but I'm willing to let this slide today. 8.
Re: Ode To Mushroomhead by Beseech	11-May-03/12:46 PM
lol.
Re: a comment on The band "Sigh" aced their MENSA tests by Jeremi B. Handrinos	11-May-03/12:34 PM
Maybe your face, but not mine.
Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger	2-May-03/2:48 PM
Don't thank her. Not that she isn't the best thing since a tuna melt, but it ruins your poem's bottom and some people are judgemental and bias. Other than that. Hilarious. Talking about GW though, She's the first person in my life that stepped through the membrane of what true love or real love is and offered to help me stay sober. Not that no one cares. It's just a lot of work and there is an exhausting amount of communication involved in helping a realy resourceful and brilliant person get off of hard candy. It takes a lot of love, and trust in a situation were you might be the only one there that still has the ability to do that 'trust' and 'love' you know what i mean? She's my friend, and I know that she loves me, and oddly enough. That's something I'm just grasping, weird huh. Life is crazy like that, but yesterday I saw my three year old son's first soccer game (he's three) and i was sober, and i only smoked two cigarettes. lol, but ah, that's big in my mind right now. 1 week sober. I have a really special circle of friends, and my son may totally suck right now at soccer, god bless his tiny little man legs, (he's great at the sax though!) atleast now I can participate on a level that's rational and benificial for everyone. I was great at soccer and still am, he needs me. We can do it. together. lol. that should be my speech at the na aa olympics this year. Oh well, what ever.
Re: Sir John Betjeman is dead Nicholas. by Bachus	2-May-03/1:42 PM
Good god man. You are the boredest mother fucker alive, congratulations. Wait a minute... Am I fucking talking to myself? You see what sobriety does? Look at my fucking poodle?! Just look at her...*sob, weep, spasm* Look at my tofu ice sculpters (tofu is fun to freeze and chisel) Gaze at my supplements and pedestrian signs! HA! HA! I'm plum mad (kzsdfjghoabuiprvgioprbyfgiopv) that's the punchline to a welshian factory workers two series jokesky. called the bumsky from down undersky.
Re: a comment on Jared Leto & Apocalyptic poetry. by Shardik	30-Apr-03/12:53 AM
Can you argue the difference between a poem and an opinion while I make some popcorn?
Re: a comment on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik	30-Apr-03/12:50 AM
Cold, of course. The Chileans dispose of their dead sometimes wrapped in cloth dumped in the lake. the sharks (bull) have gotten use to the taste.
Re: waking up to fucking reality by d35	29-Apr-03/5:32 PM
I never thought of putting pineapples on my chizstek, THANKS!
Re: a comment on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik	29-Apr-03/5:23 PM
Have you ever seen a ufo plecostomus? or an emeral or gold nugget plecostomus? Did you know that bull sharks are notorious maneaters and freshwater sharks? Don't swim alone in Chilean lakes... Trust me.
Re: The Captain Plecostumus Rap by INTRANSIT	29-Apr-03/5:11 PM
you are really quite funny, my plecostomus was torn appart to weeks ago by my red evil and green terror. In takes a mean pleco to scrape glass in my tank. oh and it's. wick wa wick wa wick wah wicky wah, chick chaw.
Re: sunday morning precarious by andrewjthomas	29-Apr-03/5:01 PM
It border lines being a bit to contrived, unless you guys didn't fuck then it would make sense.
Re: a comment on Brother by andrewjthomas	29-Apr-03/4:58 PM
Perhaps, once you figure it out. You can re-edit this.
Re: Pine by andrewjthomas	29-Apr-03/4:55 PM
pining.
Re: Brother by andrewjthomas	29-Apr-03/4:18 PM
Fresh.
Re: Japanese nature. by daniella	29-Apr-03/4:13 PM
Great! but your entire gist of the spirit is in the title not the process of explaining it to yourself.
Re: a comment on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik	29-Apr-03/4:09 PM
been there done that. Baba yaga's epic St. Germain covers that. I think it was blasted off by hornets and sea urchins though, and there would be no blood sense it was inside the pulp not outside.