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Japanese nature. (Haiku) by daniella
a topic in 5 describe, act, feel in 7 summative phrase 5

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.0672355
Overall Rank: 6643
Posted: April 29, 2003 9:35 AM PDT; Last modified: April 29, 2003 9:35 AM PDT
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[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.102 | 29-Apr-03/10:02 AM | Reply
you better be right. if i cram all that into 17 and it's wrong, i'm gonna come after you. 9. who's backin' you on this?
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.205.238 > INTRANSIT | 5-May-03/1:07 PM | Reply
promise i am right
indulge yourself in haiku
trust me thoroughly
[8] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Apr-03/4:13 PM | Reply
Great! but your entire gist of the spirit is in the title not the process of explaining it to yourself.
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.205.238 > Shardik | 5-May-03/1:11 PM | Reply
the title refers to the nature of japanese haiku which is a five seven five dance and the content of each line.. i am not explaining it to anyone. i simply understand it as such. eso.
[7] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/11:04 AM | Reply
cute.
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