| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
29-Oct-02/9:01 AM |
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Thankyou for this. It's a bleak day up here and I have not yet been able to shake off the feeling of complete inaction that i woke up with. You have moved me and i now feel inspired to go and write one of me own as i haven't posted anything for a while. Keep up the good work. (I haven't voted because i don't understand the way they work out the average. eg. 3 votes of 10 will give an average of say...5.7, when correct me if i'm wrong but should it not be 10? And anyway, i don't really think that you can "rank" a poem. It is understood personally to every reader
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| Re: Precious Gift by longships |
1-Sep-02/4:17 AM |
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A touching and heartfelt poem. Nice.
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| Re: Conversation Unspoken by JuddNelson |
28-Jul-02/7:48 AM |
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A beautiful poem, it would work on me!Did it work for you?Bit about brushing away tears made a shiver run down my spine.
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| Re: The train by Art Glocken |
28-Jul-02/7:39 AM |
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Yeah!been there. A nice light-hearted outlook at the rail situation. Muine would have been more like F*&$%ng bl*&&Y Ba"??$%rd trains!
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| Re: in the eye of the stone dragon: by Sapphire |
20-Jul-02/4:07 AM |
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| Re: i wake up from a dream of my mouth by silvertongueddevil |
20-Jul-02/4:04 AM |
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Very nice. Sincere feelings of longing are conveyed. You could probably take this one further and make it more but it is good in it's own right.
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| Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum |
18-Jul-02/10:17 AM |
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| Re: Bandages of the Beast by Kashi |
10-Jul-02/10:17 AM |
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Beautifully written, sent shivers down my spine at some points.
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| Re: This Is Just to Say by waltfreakinwhitman |
9-Jul-02/12:16 PM |
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| Re: -=Dark_Angel=- by waltfreakinwhitman |
9-Jul-02/12:13 PM |
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| Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn |
9-Jul-02/12:09 PM |
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Erotic without being at all smutty, well done!
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