Re: Reflected, Dreamed by Frass |
3-Sep-02/2:35 PM |
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3-Sep-02/2:49 PM |
G.W. read any of my other poems lately?
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5-Sep-02/8:56 AM |
Qu'??tes-vous des types disant, est-vous un ce certain tri de code fran??ais? Je vraiment ne comprends pas vos commentaires. Laissez une r??ponse, merci.
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5-Sep-02/8:58 AM |
Non! Je ne suis pas devenu fou! ZZ
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5-Sep-02/9:02 AM |
Siete babza giusto? Tutto che sappia ?? italiano.
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5-Sep-02/9:06 AM |
Je ne vous comprends pas, utilise le fran??ais correctement
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5-Sep-02/9:11 AM |
"saviour" and "savior" are the same thing. Could be that's why you spelt it the same way. All the languages I've checked on do not spell "poem", "poeme". "I challenge thee to a dueling of wits thou knave!" :-D
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5-Sep-02/9:16 AM |
thanks for the 10 baba! kisses upon you. (I'm not a guy. the name should've told you that)
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6-Sep-02/7:57 AM |
thank you very much Christof
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6-Sep-02/8:00 AM |
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Re: A Musical Dream by vulcan |
6-Sep-02/8:09 AM |
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Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
10-Sep-02/8:52 AM |
I like your imagery Christof. Like Limness I would say you should put a full stop at the end of Stanza3 but then again, it's your work and your message.
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Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
10-Sep-02/8:53 AM |
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Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus |
10-Sep-02/8:55 AM |
Bachus you naughty boy! The last stanza gives me the impression that sunshine meant nothing to you.
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Re: Birth by nentwined |
10-Sep-02/8:58 AM |
Oh my God you have 74 "10"s. Wow. The imagery creates a very nice love scene. This is good.
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Re: At my grandmother's aging sight by vulcan |
10-Sep-02/9:02 AM |
I don't exactly get the last 3 lines of S5, but otherwise this is very good. You seem to be expressing a slight fear of growing old.
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10-Sep-02/9:04 AM |
I love this, love this, love this! Perfecto!
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11-Sep-02/6:58 AM |
Hey sav876, on closer inspection, there are a lot of errors with spelling and apostrophe in this poem, but it is still very cool.
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Re: want it by sontei |
11-Sep-02/1:08 PM |
For some reason I find this both funny and sweet.
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Re: Ever Felt by nightii |
11-Sep-02/1:09 PM |
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