| Re: Escape by Redfin |
20-Aug-02/3:43 PM |
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This is nice, and speaks of contentment, I like it.
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3-Sep-02/8:00 AM |
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3-Sep-02/8:06 AM |
I know that accrue and abhor do not really go into the sentences I used them in but I guess it's just symbolic to me. I'm working on a way to make them show what I mean. :-)
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3-Sep-02/8:11 AM |
hey Zz I've done a little work on it. tell me if the first line now makes a little more sense. As for the second, it is meant to be and oxymoron relating to quantity. I'm still working on it. :)
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| Re: The Hand of God by Christof |
3-Sep-02/8:39 AM |
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I actually like it. It's good. By the way I didn't know there was an Englander here. Nice to meet ya!
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| Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage |
3-Sep-02/9:23 AM |
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Jeez guys all she said was "I hate you". I gave this poem an 8 cuz although it seems very naive and naivete is blasted horridly on this site, everyone at some points in their lives experience the feeling. I guess it seems naive because the poem though expressing hate doesn't sound forceful. good luck.
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3-Sep-02/9:24 AM |
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hmmm... never thought of it that way
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3-Sep-02/9:26 AM |
By the way guys this is my first ever serious poem and it has sentimental value please don't blast it.;-)
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3-Sep-02/9:29 AM |
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why thanks guys. The title really doesn't fit but it cuz I'm trying to have at least one poem in the best category. That will definitely give me a boost in fortitude and resolution(to create more poems). do I even make sense to myself?
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3-Sep-02/9:31 AM |
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Hey if you guys liked this one tell me what you think of kismet fufilled(1), cuz this is actually supposed to be related to it.
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3-Sep-02/9:33 AM |
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3-Sep-02/9:37 AM |
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Gents and ladies, I NEED comments on "wandering thoughts(2)" that's my very favorite poem. Fill me in on what you think of it!
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3-Sep-02/2:05 PM |
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3-Sep-02/2:09 PM |
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I did read all those books, they didn't get me far. :-)
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3-Sep-02/2:10 PM |
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Darling, feeling a bit cranky as usual? Well for your sake I'll let you in on a little secret. I know Jesus Christ and he is my saviour.
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3-Sep-02/2:11 PM |
Oh and D.A. it's POEM not POEME. Thanks;-)
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3-Sep-02/2:17 PM |
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Zz you're already beginning to understand it. Yes,I am experiencing a taste I don't like and yes,at the time I was shutting myself away. :-)Thanks for the tips
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3-Sep-02/2:29 PM |
Believe me I have grown up
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3-Sep-02/2:31 PM |
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I have seen shit - both physical and mental - than anyone 7 years older than me will ever get to see in their life-time. My so-called "naivete" is my only source of healing.
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3-Sep-02/2:32 PM |
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thanks for the ego-stroking Frass :-)
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