on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 9:33 AM
Danke, Merci, Grazie
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:09 PM
I did read all those books, they didn't get me far. :-)
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:10 PM
Darling, feeling a bit cranky as usual? Well for your sake I'll let you in on a little secret. I know Jesus Christ and he is my saviour.
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:11 PM
Oh and D.A. it's POEM not POEME. Thanks;-)
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:29 PM
Believe me I have grown up
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:31 PM
I have seen shit - both physical and mental - than anyone 7 years older than me will ever get to see in their life-time. My so-called "naivete" is my only source of healing.
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:32 PM
thanks for the ego-stroking Frass :-)
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
3 Sep 2002, 9:23 AM
Jeez guys all she said was "I hate you". I gave this poem an 8 cuz although it seems very naive and naivete is blasted horridly on this site, everyone at some points in their lives experience the feeling. I guess it seems naive because the poem though expressing hate doesn't sound forceful. good luck.
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 9:26 AM
By the way guys this is my first ever serious poem and it has sentimental value please don't blast it.;-)
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 9:29 AM
why thanks guys. The title really doesn't fit but it cuz I'm trying to have at least one poem in the best category. That will definitely give me a boost in fortitude and resolution(to create more poems). do I even make sense to myself?
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 9:31 AM
Hey if you guys liked this one tell me what you think of kismet fufilled(1), cuz this is actually supposed to be related to it.
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:06 AM
I know that accrue and abhor do not really go into the sentences I used them in but I guess it's just symbolic to me. I'm working on a way to make them show what I mean. :-)
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:11 AM
hey Zz I've done a little work on it. tell me if the first line now makes a little more sense. As for the second, it is meant to be and oxymoron relating to quantity. I'm still working on it. :)
on The Hand of God by Christof
3 Sep 2002, 8:39 AM
I actually like it. It's good. By the way I didn't know there was an Englander here. Nice to meet ya!
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 8:00 AM
thanks Anagram
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 9:37 AM
Gents and ladies, I NEED comments on "wandering thoughts(2)" that's my very favorite poem. Fill me in on what you think of it!
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 9:24 AM
hmmm... never thought of it that way
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:05 PM
Merci Beaucoup
on some deleted poem
3 Sep 2002, 2:17 PM
Zz you're already beginning to understand it. Yes,I am experiencing a taste I don't like and yes,at the time I was shutting myself away. :-)Thanks for the tips