| Re: advice for the heated by <~> |
13-Mar-03/9:54 AM |
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14-Mar-03/6:43 AM |
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Ok . wish granted. Hope you are happy.
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14-Mar-03/6:45 AM |
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very nice--reminded me of an e e cummings poem about the baloonman whistling far and wee...
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| Re: The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus |
14-Mar-03/6:48 AM |
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I liked it OK. the part about never getting "laid" sounds common.
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| Re: Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin |
14-Mar-03/6:49 AM |
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Grated dead would be funny, too. like parmesan.
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18-Mar-03/9:45 AM |
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18-Mar-03/9:47 AM |
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18-Mar-03/9:48 AM |
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I can relate to that. I broke a rib last weekend riding a donkey.
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18-Mar-03/9:49 AM |
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sounds like a drinking song.
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18-Mar-03/9:50 AM |
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what is a fornice? a furnace? call me confused.
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18-Mar-03/9:52 AM |
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an insightful alck of vulgarity compared to your other poems. more like this, please.
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18-Mar-03/10:11 AM |
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powerful, except you could stengthen the impact by losing the "tiny thong underwear" line--it borders on perversion and i don't think that's what you wanted here.
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| Re: Jokie Smurf by Bachus |
16-May-03/5:26 AM |
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| Re: Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus |
16-May-03/5:26 AM |
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nice toy theme, an excellent sense of playfulness
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| Re: form: haibun by Poetsettle |
16-May-03/5:27 AM |
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sma ll typo "shes" but a lovely poem.
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| Re: Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
16-May-03/5:29 AM |
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Lucky never slept with his mom. That's ridiculous.
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| Re: Payday by wdallan |
16-May-03/5:30 AM |
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mmmm ramen. i like the hot and spicy flavor.
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| Re: Icarus up by horus8 |
16-May-03/5:31 AM |
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| Re: A Buncha Dungeons and Dragons Haiku by razorgrin |
16-May-03/5:32 AM |
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| Re: Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z |
16-May-03/5:33 AM |
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you've nailed down the sense of mystery--so much that I have no idea what the hell this is supposed to be. but I like it.
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