Re: untitled by betty	5-Mar-03/1:32 AM
Delightful.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-03/1:36 AM
"then if an iraqi falls in the ocean and no being is around will the splash be heard?" now that's funny.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-03/1:44 AM
Five mor comments until the 2,000 club even though i've actually dropped 5,000. think of that? that's atleast 100 people that hate me passionately, yet i am undaunted... In fact [big yawn] i'm tired, and resting safer knowing my cock and god's cock share an image. An image of growth and perpetual recreation that only a mad man could find stimulating, i even made brownies for the occassion. REAP IT!!!!!!!! oh sorry z for orating i'm practicing for parent teacher conferences on Monday. I'm reading a piece i wrote on emotionally unavailable role models and hot asian chicks coupled by the relevance of pink dott
Re: Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH	5-Mar-03/2:04 AM
It's always sad to see straight edged hip hop wigger's trying to describe their mothers pain. You my friend are a master. A true knower of what it is to know what it is. i'm impressed, we all are very very impressed and moved by your words here 10!
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-03/12:51 PM
Is it your connotation that squeezes at my or the plot. hmmm. Should i vote, or hmmm. love him love him not love him love him him not love. 10!
Re: The Fire Giver by OneFingerAnswer	5-Mar-03/3:29 PM
Yes. "I'm glad you metioned the content because I want to get that out of the way early. This isn't about God and Satan as dieties or religious figures. Rather it's about "good" and "bad." One way I was taking it was the idea that good behavior doesn't attract much attention. I actually had one of my classmates from highschool in mind. He was a "good kid" and all through high school he was B/C average. Three days before graduation he ran himself into a tree in the car his parents had bought him as a graduation present. He lived through it even though he hadn't meant to. When I asked him why he did it he said "To be remembered." To be honest, I think it worked." by the way this is profound, thanks, i understand now. Sorry about earlier my brain is acting up again.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Mar-03/8:40 PM
Jeremi? How much for a baby rodent, and a room? with no view. I will keep the books and the mit though.
Re: Death From Above by Jimbo	6-Mar-03/8:54 PM
a bit long, but quality. I could edit a version of this for you.
Re: Anouk by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:08 AM
Charming.
Re: No Sense by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:12 AM
Afterword 1 (Free verse) by daniella He slides his step to the side, and a heart skips its beating. Like a bird lying lame on the wet winter hour of dawn. Like no approach he comes, like a tongue withdrawn. No sense, no truth, no arms to hold on. On a mission of mercy up over. The newest light is mounting up to correct the marks left for another. Try that.
Re: Sofia by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:15 AM
Really lovely. 10!
Re: just as we were by daniella	7-Mar-03/12:18 AM
"meagre" other then that little glitch which practically works well enough any way. Great poem!
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-03/9:53 AM
Bivalve, or bituminous coal would have served your ability better, here, that is. Not on the planet. BLACK POWER!
Re: As the Redwood Ages by DurtKL	7-Mar-03/10:03 AM
Dry semen, i feel, works much better then name dropping, or cornholing deities that simply just do not play a role any longer in our well being. God does not talk. No-doz? don't punk out, just take the real thing. your imagery here, though fastly sought out i'm sure through hours of sleepless research. was like eating a mouthful of jelly beans, with meatloaf, and champagne while listening to Gobi desert sound bites on lsd and then sand papering ones elbows. Great job. 7.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-03/10:06 AM
He was the most listless 'bottom' ever. Almost like fucking a pile of dry sand, but what the hell sublets need love too.
Re: Unholy War by marvelis	7-Mar-03/9:52 PM
I never knew there was a holy war?
Re: Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik	7-Mar-03/11:17 PM
Oh Shardik... You trap baiter you. Must your mind live at the Cirkle K Try Chapstick from my ass You know? I just love Oprah. Want a Chocodile?
Re: Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95	8-Mar-03/10:59 AM
I am the sexiest nude warlock to date. here let me try an edit down the cat walk. watch this. Blackened Cauldron (Free verse) by Ellie95 With spells of evil. The turbulant chantings of the end whisper to my heaving bones. as if an evil witch stirs my gutt from within her black cauldron, No rest can I find with this turbulance inside. No peace I gather from the Evil The dark witch controls me. I know this deep in my soul.
Re: Cussedness by Nicholas Jones	8-Mar-03/11:02 AM
Lordy, Lordy... Remember Gordy? from stand by me?
Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones	8-Mar-03/11:05 AM
Alexander never asked he just went. The turks are so broke it'll be close, but this idiot will do it anyway. Nostrodamus told me so.