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6-Apr-03/9:32 PM |
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Another factor in the growing spread of AIDS. Blue bib or not.
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6-Apr-03/9:58 PM |
It's can't bondo the dent, chum.
Or not eat on lent.
Where have they all went?
To go get me a fucking clark kent bar.
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| Re: and i don't even care by nolan |
7-Apr-03/11:22 PM |
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Now that's breaking some fucking wind. lol! asl???
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| Re: Fix it by Nanshe |
7-Apr-03/11:30 PM |
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that's a fucking aneurysm my friend, totally unfixable. however you did a wonderful job complicating an uncomplicated and ancient structure (sonnets) and that's got to count for something somewhere. and the unaccessability of the piece? also, right off the fucking charts. Great job.
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| Re: For Kristen by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
7-Apr-03/11:33 PM |
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here. don't say i never did nothing for you.
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| Re: Tendering the question by Nanshe |
7-Apr-03/11:38 PM |
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GQTIP awarde. not that there's much competition tonight.
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8-Apr-03/12:10 PM |
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10-Apr-03/7:55 PM |
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Are you the California lottery or something. You edit as if 100 new and mundanely dyslexic poets are going to miraculously appear here one day out of nowhere and find this shit interesting. Every day, same thing, I look up and tada! there it is staring at me, your mediocrity in deafening blAck font alla baby blue.
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10-Apr-03/7:59 PM |
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And another thing, ravens don't fucking soar okay they fly from point a to point b. they are scavengers that spend the majority of their time eating on the ground. Birds of prey soar... Ravens flap their wings as they go from point a to b. they do not hover, soar, do funny circles. they mostly sit and wait for an opportunistic meal.
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| Re: Originality by shwenatjadeflower |
10-Apr-03/10:34 PM |
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Once, I almost choked to death on a frozen milky~way bar while naked on pcp in a Mcdonald's walkin cooler.
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| Re: You Say by adrenalize |
11-Apr-03/8:27 AM |
"The loneliness
Thatâs my only companion
And yet
You say
You want them back"
also, or too would be the last word probably 'too'.
then you could say... But that's something you can never have back, or unreturnable. and that would be putting your foot down nicely to conclude the piece.
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| Re: Sorry for all the things by Mutant_X |
11-Apr-03/8:31 AM |
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Sincerety, is a nose wipe on a cold sleeve at the bus stop in third grade.
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| Re: You are not me by Mutant_X |
11-Apr-03/8:33 AM |
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A typical topical right down the receptacle, "now out the window".
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| Re: Februarys mother by INTRANSIT |
11-Apr-03/8:35 AM |
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"awaken until September" reach September. or, survive the journey.
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| Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig |
11-Apr-03/8:38 AM |
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..................I LOVE YOU !" you can lose this, because the reader already knows, and if they don't by the end they don't deserve to.
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| Re: Dogwood Winter by Rex Karrs |
11-Apr-03/9:02 AM |
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Seems to me that you're in Korea often, Rex.
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| Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins |
11-Apr-03/9:10 AM |
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I will quit smoking and prepare.
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| Re: The Warriors Song by cleverdevice |
12-Apr-03/12:44 AM |
/mp3/The Crutchling.mp3
Ignite this.
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| Re: The Crutchling by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Apr-03/12:49 AM |
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This is now a song in the illtunes section of gangbox.com enjoy. song 80.
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12-Apr-03/2:36 PM |
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hilarious, makes me want to go and bottle up some guarana of my own. Except the last Guaranian passed away late yesterday.
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