| Re: Greybie Blue by abecedarian |
8-Nov-03/3:04 PM |
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Are you trying to say something?
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| Re: The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602 |
8-Nov-03/3:09 PM |
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Quit sniffling! What kind of satanist are you? How can you be proper and evil wearing that cockerspaniel hat and a pink tutu?
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| Re: The Burial by Mona Lisa |
8-Nov-03/3:21 PM |
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Good form and attention to structure, but cliche imagery.
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| Re: Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/6:48 PM |
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My title suggestion would be "Any title but that one" . Or "Whatever happened to Viking Burials".
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| Re: Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/6:51 PM |
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how about " five Rhyming reasons why peach pie reminds me of your buried corpse".?
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| Re: Hands by frostygirl |
10-Nov-03/1:05 AM |
That's the slut in you going for seconds.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-03/1:10 AM |
On Visiting My Father
Lyric
9.14
17
sliver
Rain
Free verse
7.70
15
lydia evelyn
Confusion
Other
7.58
15
lydia evelyn
You Would Take Me Back?
Free verse
7.52
15
lydia evelyn
Your Past
Free verse
7.50
12
lydia evelyn
Broken Ground
Lyric
7.45
14
sliver
Some lights Don't Shine
Free verse
7.44
12
sliver
Controlled
Free verse
7.33
17
lydia evelyn
Meagan (Prose)
Other
7.28
18
wcrystal lane swiftw
Your Only Warning
Free verse
7.25
13
lydia evelyn
Amor Por Tigo (Espanol)
Free verse
7.19
13
lydia evelyn
Aftermath
Free verse
7.14
14
lydia evelyn
Nice Guy (Drama with Mike Herriman)
Other
7.12
18
wcrystal lane swiftw
Disappointed
Ode
7.12
18
wcrystal lane swiftw
Depressed
Other
7.12
18
wcrystal lane swiftw
Missing Danny (Prose)
Other
7.11
19
wcrystal lane swiftw
End of Us
Ode
7.11
19
wcrystal lane swiftw
Cornerhouse Evening
Other
7.11
19
wcrystal lane swiftw
Sad
Haiku
7.08
13
sliver
Empty Moon
Free verse
7.07
12
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Whats wrong with this picture? I mean other than the contrived boring poetry.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-03/1:18 AM |
When you write do you cross your legs? And why do you continuously keep voting a bunch of soggy cracker jack poems onto the best list as if they would have walked there on their own?
"Those that live only through their need to be needed through others? Suffer from a thirst a flood couldn't ar(c)k away from them. Enjoy your boat trip.
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| Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined |
10-Nov-03/1:21 AM |
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Thank god for the last two sentences becauses I almost wretched from Ikea poetry overload.
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| Re: Why...? by muffielouise |
10-Nov-03/1:48 AM |
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Please do, but not in front of me. I'm not wearing shoes.
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| Re: Octubre 1992 by The Eskimo King |
10-Nov-03/1:56 AM |
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What do you get when you cross polar bears with a famous soft drink? Bipolar autistic brats with bad teeth and poor taste in advertising naturally.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-03/2:04 AM |
"hold my heart"? You were obviously never in honors English or biology. when you think of a title, do you?
By the way? "She lies for love
She lies with him
A lighted crack!
Gone again.
Lost in the corners
Lost in the cracks
Just a speck of dust
On a marlboro pack"
So bad, I have uncooked spaghetti noodles
boiling water to end the absolute pointless
existence to both them and having been a part
of your dust speckled pack of smokes? Look out!
He smokes! Granted Cockalboro lights, still it's smoke.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-03/2:10 AM |
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I often have to pinch myself to wake up from just how tired I am of hoping you're joking. Because, no one in there right mind could write about so much worthless shit, and then turn around and vote themselves to #1! If only you titled your poetry as bravely as you wrote them.
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| Re: A heart without keys by sliver |
10-Nov-03/2:13 AM |
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I've read color printed hand folded scientology brochures with more promise.
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| Re: The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485 |
10-Nov-03/9:28 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-03/10:27 AM |
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I believe you've confused Autumn for the end of the world, and yes, it's high time we all wept.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Nov-03/10:31 AM |
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By the way? you are the lucky recipient of my 4,000th comment. A moment of silence please while I add a degree to my black belt.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Nov-03/10:02 PM |
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I take it, ass sex is a possibilty also?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Nov-03/10:04 PM |
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Calling Dr. Frankenplum we have an aborted fetish roaming isle 5.
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| Re: God Save The King by Caducus |
11-Nov-03/10:13 PM |
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Yeah, God save something, anything.
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