Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	9-Aug-02/5:45 PM
they have yet to bestow me with my well deserved laureateship...i must not slip and fall on top of the deans wife again..i am so close to nothing now that i can almost disengage machismo..no no no ..suck it in father i have sinned i have sinned by ending up just like you..thank you pharmaceutical boy (otep) for your kind words, but my father flannigan is beyond all perdition..we can never forgive him, but i must forgive myself..yes and touch the oil to my head and make the sign of the cross...yes oil..my head..the cross..the.....good boy smiles fangs and grows nails to perch to roost to phallic the name of.-----.shhhhhhh. pray to gozerh
Re: life sucks sometimes..ditto by New Life Drug	9-Aug-02/5:58 PM
indeed...fix line three, and line nine (you'll see) now as for guns..guns are no fun my young gifted friend.our weapon is pen. the only way to get through these nasty mental fixations is to do it in story form..acting all of this stuff out could crack mothers nice tile counter. let's behave. i give you an 8 for your hate, but please correct typos. or not it works well too just let them go and bother old people's eyes. god's speed. <brought to you by 'pumptor' the only way to add girth to a skinny member, and 'white in' the paper, that corrects itself. good afternoon..c
Re: The Advice by T.Becquerel II	9-Aug-02/6:22 PM
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. mirror mirror on the wall who hath scribed in my bathroom stall.the mAster of qoutes except for two.the first and second line are all that's true! the rest is only entrails, and baba yaga's vagina hail. my kale gun has been drawn! stand fast for a calcium rich blast.l
Re: The Things I love and Elempty by New Life Drug	9-Aug-02/7:41 PM
nostradomus was a young man once also... with quatrains he saw submarines and zepplins, but alas i only saw sulphuric smoke noxious gas at delphi, no oracle..no ariels only fuel.. everything fuel..yes fuel
Re: Sawdust by New Life Drug	9-Aug-02/7:55 PM
i wanted to give you a ten, but then your overall score would have sky rocketed.this is a pure crack in your skull.. truly..i see too much light for your age..i must humble you..i must humble myself..do i have to be a redmark too? yes, i think i do..(this little diddy is fuckingkiller) you win the HORUS 8 TEN THAT GOT A ZERO FOR NO GOOD REASON AWARD CUZ ITS TOO GOOD ..don't worry others will come and bring much fruit to your alter, and i predict this will be on the top fifteen list before any of mine(honestly i don't pay attention, really) trust me..i am a ranc-amateur with hardly any real grasp of creative writing, but fuckin aye i can clam like a mad man. this is a wonderfull poem???
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Aug-02/8:34 PM
if you can thrill your patience stubar, then you my friend are hired...yes hired indeed!
Re: alone by mia	9-Aug-02/8:37 PM
humans are ants, insects wear pants. smile. break out your chitin...e
Re: pull by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/10:43 PM
i enjoy your writing, and the simple ones too. you have impeccable taste. with a well rounded structue. pregnant yet starving.......i ring my bell for another! another, and another i am a poet you are a writer. we are both readers...yes we read...i need to read..you write well..your beak is a fine ceramic your hoof is sure footed...write to live!??
Re: big 'ol stupid by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:05 PM
holy fucking shit that is twice as good as acid and free. i will do that again then move on. your imagery is really supernatural divine saline.. quite rare. the title is what kicks the fence down. wow.fuck!e
Re: I like Cake by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:11 PM
nobody eats sherbert anymore
Re: i was by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:19 PM
it will never stop flipping back over on itself...flopping back over onto me.??
Re: Colloid by skaskowski	9-Aug-02/11:25 PM
lol! i will smoke a fatty and agree..what a riot!l
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/6:00 PM
there are a total of 16 'I's in this poem, should have gone the extra mile and just done a simple sentence. such as......I am me and i and we, so there, and by the way i want more than you have to give, so i'll be moving on now.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/6:44 PM
dorkburger? that is what our evolved grunts and tongue clicks as neanderthals has become.first off, i don't believe babbit and gnosticville(whatever that name was) have even read a third of this wordman's work (d.a) cuz if you had you would have instantly realized that this poem is not a child's ode'd scribble in a pee-chee folder, but his way of holding a mirror to those of you that care to look and reflect...no indeed this is not his mind, but a collection of all the "sensitive" poets work on this site smashed into one(i wont name names) to put the shoes on anothers feet..and you belittle it? why? cuz he can cut the melon eight ways with one slice, be careful what your comments and votes here imply, cuz in irony alot of you are voting on your own work here not his. take a good look at yourselfs... you might write like this alot of the time(always) which was of course the effect he wished to convey all along. Sheer magic! afternoon groms, he has bested you again without besting. ponder that with your new velvet 'hoofs'e
Re: Diminishing by <~>	11-Aug-02/10:17 PM
yes, you do, and so do i..thank the right hand for it's talent it may one day soon want another body. i'm not trusting it these days...hey z this is a 'ringer' great conrasts and noun selection. i must say i'm quite fond of your "yours selection". reads like a bullit kills with an honest days work! your hoof has been shoed! race on!u
Re: passion by lexicon	11-Aug-02/10:23 PM
sounds like something bacchus would salivate over and dode upon...therefore... you need help..call a friend or priest, or get drunk and commit, but do be careful...confess.CONFESS! or not.. <brought to you by frisky glove it's more than just a condom, it's more than just a glove.a
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/10:44 PM
the ever rarer two sentenced haiku with talk flow battle stance. it stands chiseled at the festival tent for ice sculptured contraceptive entries (it could be here till well beyond thaw). let's refrigerate it. just in case.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/11:29 PM
What doesn't piss you off daddy-o...now why would you want to capsize my medium like that...i just got comfortable in my self aware, self designed, self defense haziness...what a bummer...now i gotta try to be cool some other way.. should i say?..could i ever?..write..about what other people are writing about when their feelings about other people (now these people may write, or not) get too feely and begin to clutter up good screen space with emotions ("which aren't truth bearers") that make them feel better..fuck it hold it in until you pass gall stones that can shred a healthy urethra into string cheese everyone apparently you're giving the 'count of countenance" migranic menstrations. (owe).but i..do not do this(very much, all the time) I write of the order of nature, and the struggle fort survival and ancient symbolic instincts in "the plains of africa (1-6)", and danger..ohhhh.and birth....awe.and doo doo.yey! did i miss anything? oh yeah your vote 9/10 (cuz i hate myself immensly) ,
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/11:43 PM
i stink of last nighst wood burn. and we kept the german brown in timmy's igloo until it bloated with so much bacteria and fermenting reservoir funk it blew the entire front end off his volkswagon(trunks are in the front, germans?) oh yes the poime' the last three sentences cause it to trickle weakly, and theirs a pseudo build up, that never delivers. good night, sir. lovely hieroglyphics for my mindless minde!g
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/11:48 PM
this is old country and Zenish enough for me to say hey! i kinda like it too, but it took 2 reads 7/10! welcome bobot "nice poem"