on 9/11 by TheDevil
14 Jul 2002, 7:49 AM
looks like mommy left the computer on.
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2002, 6:59 PM
interesting form, but in this case i don't think it added anything. writing is a good outlet for depression, if you can think enough to write. hope you are only waiting for the medication to kick in to help you out. peace.
on all sex by roses are read
19 Jul 2002, 7:07 PM
i will get right to the point: holy shit. wow.
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
15 Jul 2002, 6:09 PM
you must go through a lot of hand lotion.
on For Mukhtaran Bibi in Pakistan by pkdrunner
14 Jul 2002, 6:18 PM
powerfully emotional, but it needs work, a bit disjointed in both stanzas. to the other poster: she was a woman who was gang raped to punish her family because her brother was seen walking with a girl from another caste. yes its recent.
on YOU BELONG TO ME by NATALIO
14 Jul 2002, 8:35 AM
is this a formatting error, or did you mean to type one gigantic sentence to hugely scroll across my screen? in caps, no less.
on some deleted poem
12 Jul 2002, 6:22 PM
i kept trying to stop for a breath but i could not because it ran on and on and didnt stop for anything so i kept reading and reading ...but i enjoyed it!
on firelight lost by irishfolksuicide
12 Jul 2002, 6:28 PM
'cast across your cinder breath'.. i want to write like you when i grow up.
on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen
11 Jul 2002, 8:26 PM
hope i'm replying right.. i am not the stalker - my ex was. good luck with your stalking career :)
on Proud to be black by girl
11 Jul 2002, 4:07 PM
really liked this - but the second line 'gesticulating benignly as i talk' somehow does not fit in well. loved the last 2 lines!
on This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky
11 Jul 2002, 4:13 PM
work on this one - the toilet sucking your accumulated toxins part could go first :). loved where you were heading with this.