Re: Proud to be black by girl	11-Jul-02/4:07 PM
really liked this - but the second line 'gesticulating benignly as i talk' somehow does not fit in well. loved the last 2 lines!
Re: This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking by Owner of the Sky	11-Jul-02/4:13 PM
work on this one - the toilet sucking your accumulated toxins part could go first :). loved where you were heading with this.
Re: Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen	11-Jul-02/8:26 PM
hope i'm replying right.. i am not the stalker - my ex was. good luck with your stalking career :)
Re: Daughter by pkdrunner	11-Jul-02/8:28 PM
love the last line
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jul-02/6:22 PM
i kept trying to stop for a breath but i could not because it ran on and on and didnt stop for anything so i kept reading and reading ...but i enjoyed it!
Re: firelight lost by irishfolksuicide	12-Jul-02/6:28 PM
'cast across your cinder breath'.. i want to write like you when i grow up.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	14-Jul-02/7:49 AM
looks like mommy left the computer on.
Re: YOU BELONG TO ME by NATALIO	14-Jul-02/8:35 AM
is this a formatting error, or did you mean to type one gigantic sentence to hugely scroll across my screen? in caps, no less.
Re: For Mukhtaran Bibi in Pakistan by pkdrunner	14-Jul-02/6:18 PM
powerfully emotional, but it needs work, a bit disjointed in both stanzas. to the other poster: she was a woman who was gang raped to punish her family because her brother was seen walking with a girl from another caste. yes its recent.
Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros	15-Jul-02/6:09 PM
you must go through a lot of hand lotion.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Jul-02/6:59 PM
interesting form, but in this case i don't think it added anything. writing is a good outlet for depression, if you can think enough to write. hope you are only waiting for the medication to kick in to help you out. peace.
Re: all sex by roses are read	19-Jul-02/7:07 PM
i will get right to the point: holy shit. wow.