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For Mukhtaran Bibi in Pakistan (Free verse) by pkdrunner
This is no ordinary rape The tent is full of hating witnesses In number, their presence makes it right The higher caste delivers a lesson As though lessons past we had forgot I know what pain and humiliation will come No power of good will intervene There, my father, mocked and held in evil grip Will not see my eyes plead for rescue I must spare us both that searing memory

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3858
Posted: July 14, 2002 5:53 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2002 6:14 PM PDT
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[5] Frass @ 138.88.28.148 | 14-Jul-02/6:13 PM | Reply
Makes me want to learn what happened; a recent current event? I can't quite tell what happened.
[8] evergreen @ 63.208.223.183 | 14-Jul-02/6:18 PM | Reply
powerfully emotional, but it needs work, a bit disjointed in both stanzas. to the other poster: she was a woman who was gang raped to punish her family because her brother was seen walking with a girl from another caste. yes its recent.
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