poemranker ::For Mukhtaran Bibi in Pakistan by pkdrunner

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Free verse № 4556

For Mukhtaran Bibi in Pakistan

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Jul 2002 · Edited 14 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

This is no ordinary rape The tent is full of hating witnesses In number, their presence makes it right The higher caste delivers a lesson As though lessons past we had forgot I know what pain and humiliation will come No power of good will intervene There, my father, mocked and held in evil grip Will not see my eyes plead for rescue I must spare us both that searing memory

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[5] Frass 14-Jul-02/6:13 PM Reply
Makes me want to learn what happened; a recent current event? I can't quite tell what happened.
[8] evergreen 14-Jul-02/6:18 PM Reply
powerfully emotional, but it needs work, a bit disjointed in both stanzas. to the other poster: she was a woman who was gang raped to punish her family because her brother was seen walking with a girl from another caste. yes its recent.