poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Mikius and replies

Comments byMikius, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Somme (A Horror Of War) by Mr Pig 20 Feb 2006, 3:35 AM
But so much less fun. :p
on You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger 20 Feb 2006, 3:33 AM
Alas, for this poem, it's no good; you've raised the bar yet again. I'm afraid my angsty stuff is no match, (Not that I won't subject you to it all anyway :p).

Keep up the good work. ^^
replying on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik 29 Apr 2003, 2:14 PM
Please don't say all that 'death is beautifull' crap. THe sad fact is death is a parting of friends, not some beautiful eternal rest. When did you see someone die you knew and say, 'Wow. How beautiful, my friend is dead'
replying on Lost love by Mikius 29 Apr 2003, 1:46 PM
I think you misunderstand. My aim here was to make it unspecific, alluring to a feeling rather than a set place or time. I appreciate you comments, but it's not the direction I want to take the poem in. The idea is more of the man trapped within himself, talking to no-one but himself, and torn, cast aside. I feel someone in that state is to emotionally involved to look back and smile, or remind himself as he is plagued with self doubt.

Anyway, I appreciate your help and might consider doing something along those lines, but if you don't like this as it is, I'm sorry, but I don't plan to radically re-work it (for the moment, anyway)
replying on Regrets by Mikius 29 Apr 2003, 1:11 PM
I see what you mean. I'll look at re-working it. I'm also not too happy about the last 3 verses, they seem lacking in description. Any other suggestions?
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger 28 Apr 2003, 3:51 PM
Who gave this a 1 I wonder? Ah, well each to thier own.
The only thing wrong is 'So my stallion and me turned away'. It seems wrong for some reason. Perhaps 'my stallion and I'?
on Morning Gory by Bobjim 7 Apr 2003, 3:57 PM
How low can you go?
replying on The poet by Mikius 15 Jan 2003, 7:15 AM
I changed it a bit, but I quite like it, as it shows him bringing it to life.
replying on Morning on Galapados by Mikius 9 Jan 2003, 3:21 PM
Fixed it up now. Thanks for the suggestions. I also added a new verse, so you mean the 3rd to last, not 2nd. Please leave anymore help you can give.