on Morning Gory by Bobjim
7 Apr 2003, 3:57 PM
How low can you go?
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
28 Apr 2003, 3:51 PM
Who gave this a 1 I wonder? Ah, well each to thier own.
The only thing wrong is 'So my stallion and me turned away'. It seems wrong for some reason. Perhaps 'my stallion and I'?
The only thing wrong is 'So my stallion and me turned away'. It seems wrong for some reason. Perhaps 'my stallion and I'?
on You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger
20 Feb 2006, 3:33 AM
Alas, for this poem, it's no good; you've raised the bar yet again. I'm afraid my angsty stuff is no match, (Not that I won't subject you to it all anyway :p).
Keep up the good work. ^^
Keep up the good work. ^^