| Re: The Cad by beakism |
20-Jun-02/6:46 AM |
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| Re: Concrete by beakism |
20-Jun-02/7:03 AM |
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Jhesu, why can't a guy make an observation without commenting on it with some heavy-handed moralism? Sometimes you can actually read a piece and get the meaning on your own. I liked it.
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20-Jun-02/7:04 AM |
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Splat! is my scatological commentary on this thing.Do cartoon sound effects instead.
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| Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583 |
20-Jun-02/7:41 AM |
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Truly 'tis an angelic action that this treacle leaps from your pen 'stead of ink. Not necessarily heavenly angels, though...
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20-Jun-02/7:42 AM |
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I want... there to be a point to this thing.
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| Re: These things that we bury by Jody Conn |
20-Jun-02/7:45 AM |
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I love it...the rhythm is delicious, it reminds me of something I can't quite remember, but enjoyed. The "ego or id " part is good.
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20-Jun-02/7:46 AM |
It's good.
(p.s. these things are always in the last place you look.Mine was by a river.)
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
20-Jun-02/7:50 AM |
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| Re: Fragrant Blossom by Jody Conn |
20-Jun-02/7:51 AM |
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Sextacular.My everything curled up purring..
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| Re: every bite remembers in my skin by silvertongueddevil |
20-Jun-02/9:01 AM |
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I really enjoy the beginning.The "Reminding" is a bit...eh, but this is nice.
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| Re: No other limericks? by gothwalk |
20-Jun-02/9:02 AM |
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20-Jun-02/9:12 AM |
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| Re: #9 by mikejedw |
21-Jun-02/7:43 AM |
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Yay! Feet are happiest naked.
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| Re: Cat and Door by gothwalk |
21-Jun-02/8:07 AM |
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| Re: Style by wdallan |
21-Jun-02/11:02 AM |
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21-Jun-02/11:06 AM |
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21-Jun-02/11:20 AM |
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It's entertaining. I enjoy it greatly. The mental images that go with it really make it.
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